No one mourns a piece of broken machinery (1/1)

[ben_addicted]

Rating - PG
Word count - 2009
Summary - Sherlock is watching John standing over his grave and does what Sherlock does best: thinks too much.  
Genre- Character study, tragedy, friendship

Comments

Review

[bemused_writer]

This was a great concept, and it was really well done. I love the insight you gave to Sherlock's character.

The only thing I would say could use editing is your paragraphs; remember to double space new paragraphs for easier reading.

Other than that, this was a great one shot. :)

Re: Review

[ben_addicted]

Thank you so much! I wasn't expecting any response! Thank you :) I didn't realise the paragraph thing had happened so I'll go back through and correct that - thank you for pointing it out

Re: Review

[bemused_writer]

You're welcome! I'm glad I could be of help. ^_^