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Feb 27, 2007 20:18

Title: Belonging
Fandom: Top Gun
Pairing: Maverick/Iceman
Rating: NC-17, to be safe.
Word Count: 1260
Disclaimer: Clearly not mine. The movie would've had more smut and less McGillis if they were.
Summary: A decade or so on, Iceman and Maverick meet again.

Belonging )

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ravenclaw_devi February 28 2007, 06:47:07 UTC
Beautifully written.

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judin April 22 2007, 19:58:29 UTC
That was really great! Hot and just right.

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duckgirlie September 18 2007, 16:04:56 UTC
I can't believe I haven't commented on this yet!

Excellent, as always. This line:

the kind of fundamentally meaningless banter he knows pushes all of Ice's well-concealed buttons

Sums up almost exactly the dyamic of this pairing that makes me love it. And you get that whole not-love thing I love with these too.

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thepuppeteer November 29 2009, 20:36:20 UTC
I liked this a lot. As far as fanfiction goes, this was quite realistic. !:)

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carlyinrome April 25 2011, 01:53:46 UTC


I love the cadence of this, how things just roll out with military precision.

Mav pushed back against him, taunting him as he did so, the kind of fundamentally meaningless banter he knows pushes all of Ice's well-concealed buttons, and that just made him thrust into him deeper, harder, as expected. He was radiating heat. Mav felt like it would burn him up.

Lovely.

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