Make My Heart A Better Place - Fletcher/Jones - Standalone

Jul 28, 2009 10:28

Title: Make My Heart A Better Place
Author: russsel
Part: 1/1
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Fletcher/Jones
Genre: AU, Romance
Summary: Danny receives an unexpected visitor in the middle of the night.
A/N: I'm in writing steroids right now, just so you know. :) I don't know how this came about, really. I just sat down and began writing. I think it's a sensitive ( Read more... )

!standalone, pairing: fletcher/jones, fandom: mcfly

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dijian_kwaii July 28 2009, 19:10:52 UTC

perfect :)

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bellereverie July 29 2009, 18:30:36 UTC
Thank you so much!!

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1950 July 28 2009, 21:28:33 UTC
Aw, that was so cute. I mean, yeah, it's sad, but Tom and Danny are so soft in this that it's very sweet at the same time. I appreciate that you wrote something like this, because even though it's a common issue, it is still heartbreaking and discouraging for those dealing with it. It was short and there was a simplicity to it, but that's what made it so lovely to me. That even though it's not an uncommon issue, it is still very hurtful for Tom, but at least he has Danny. And aww Danny singing to Tom, that's so precious. Really great. Good job as usual, babe ♥.

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bellereverie July 29 2009, 18:32:02 UTC
Yeah, that's exactly what I wanted to convey. And by now, I think you can understand that I love simplicity, because you don't need a fic that's overcontrived and overworked on to appreciate it as a fic.

Thank you so much!! Love you, as always!!

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asu_chan July 28 2009, 21:37:57 UTC
Awww...so cute...beautiful...
I love the way Danny is there for Tom, takes care of him. ♥
And I can understand when Danny doesn't know what to say or what to do to comfort him. I'm not good at it either. ^-^°

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bellereverie July 29 2009, 18:35:05 UTC
Thank you so much!

Yeah, that's sort of what I'd like to happen in my life as well, so this is sort of a fantasy moment that's special to me. :)

Oh, I'm so glad you could relate! I'm glad also because that's what I wanted to get across, that nobody really knows what to say in such circumstances and that they only do what they think is right to do at the moment.

Thanks again! You're so lovely

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asu_chan July 30 2009, 10:48:51 UTC
You're always welcome. <3

I can understand you. I want that, too. :)

Thanks to you, you wrote it so well. And I was so glad to read this because I thought I was the only one who doesn't know how to comfort people and what to say. ^^°

♥ ♥

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scribblemusic July 28 2009, 23:38:28 UTC
Precious!!!!

*hugs them both*

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bellereverie July 29 2009, 18:35:18 UTC
Aww, thanks!!!

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thefuturaawates July 29 2009, 13:48:55 UTC
just...wow even withe angst it was so relaxed and stayed true to real feeling (im rambling) what i trying to say is.....FLOOOOOOOOONES! XD

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bellereverie July 29 2009, 18:36:07 UTC
Thank you!!

Yeah, I get what you're saying completely. And yes, FLONES ftw!!!

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