Second Chance (III in the Second Verse)

[bellajayd]

Title: SECOND CHANCE
Author: bellajayd 
Rating: R
Pairing: Castiel/Dean, jealous!Sam.
Spoilers: Yes! Up to the most recent episode of Supernatural.
Warnings: There is NO rape/NCS or main character death. Everything else is fair game. Eventually, this will be a kid!fic [not mpreg!]-- someone will be raising himself a child [OMC].
Disclaimer: This is all a

Comments

[halcyon_age]

....My mouth was wide open while I read this story. It was worth the wait

[bellajayd]

Ah, yes. Nipples. LOL.

I totally don't buy that I sold you on top!Cas, but its nice of you to say so ;) I am so, so happy that you liked this. I'm super worried about it.

*bites nails*

The soulgasm thing was me being like, "So - WTF are they doing if it aint sex???" Hahah. Look at you using such big words, neologism FTW!

The ending totally makes me melt into a big pile of mush. I totally put that in there for "squee" effect. Hee.

*smishes*

*SPARKLES*

[halcyon_age]

No! You really did!!! Which actually kinda took me by surprised. Hearing you explain it to me I admit, didn't really sell it. But reading it did. The dynamic that you have laid out has made it believable and also really hot. I was actaully imagining myself in Dean's position.

This really is A+. What are you worried about?

[bellajayd]

For serious??? You're sold on top!Cas?

*gives you doubtful look*

I was worried because I thought that I wasn't explaining their dynamic well enough. Ask Aisling I drove her cuckoo over it! LOL.

Many people would like to be in Dean's position ;)

[horusguard76]

OMG... this is breathtakingly beautiful. More of the pie verse. *beams*

Anyway... gorgeous piece and reading it makes one long for love. Rare feat to achieve. ;) Lovely. Can't wait for the next one. This IS highly addictive, I hope you are aware of that and label it properly. ;)

And for some weird reason this chapter makes me just ridiculously happy. Thank you so much for writing this.

[bellajayd]

I happy this makes you happy! This story is totally the fluff before the storm of angst in Second Verse. LOL.

I shall certainly consider putting an WARNING: ADDICTIVE FIC label on the series ;)

Thank you for your lovely review!

[horusguard76]

What, angst? Where? Why? Oh whyyyyyyyy? Please no! No angst pie for us faithful readers. *makes big kitty eyes*

LOL Or you could just start a list stating all 'your addicts'. ;)

You're very welcome.

[bellajayd]

Pie!Verse is the fluffy series, Second Verse is totally different and a wee bit darker - what with the angel/human addiction Dean and Cas have going on. Not to mention Sammy's lil issues of brotherly love. Since it's me, pie will always be involved [no matter what I write] and it will inevitably have a happy ending but if its out and out fluff your looking for then stick to Pie!Verse :D Second Verse will have [HAS HAD] its angst moments. TRUFAX.

[camui_zuuki]

Gorgeous T_T
I so love it... really breathtaking!! Especially the ending, the last sentence is something I really wish Dean to say, to whoever he likes...

[bellajayd]

Me too! The last line is my favorite :)

Thank you!!

[darksilvercat]

*SPARKLE SPARKLE!!!*

HEE!

This was kind of adorable. And a dominant Castiel = GUH. You know I love it ^_^

[bellajayd]

Dom Cas is hot :)

*SPARKLES*

[goth_clark]

I love the idea of Castiel marking Dean and wanting to look at those marks. Lovely story.

[bellajayd]

Thank you! I am so happy you liked possessive!Cas :D