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Dec 25, 2011 18:30

Title: Conflicted
Pairing: Adam/Michael
Disclaimer: I don’t own anything.
Warnings: Teacher/Student pairing, Adam is eighteen but still in school.
Rating: R
Summary: Michael is still idealistic enough to think he can reach Adam. Adam thinks religious education sucks but his teacher is hot. Michael is conflicted.
Authors note: Really ( Read more... )

supernatural, adam/michael, rating:r, fic

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ladyknightanka December 25 2011, 20:34:58 UTC
This is so, so sweet. I adore a lot of things about it. Adam's brothers being protective and trying to help him is nice. I also love how Michael went about the whole thing and that they actually waited. That made the end even cuter. ♥

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bellacatbee December 25 2011, 20:45:22 UTC
Thank you! I'm delighted to know you liked it. Michael just demanded to be honourable. I wanted him to jump Adam in his bedroom but waiting does make it sweeter I think.

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_bluebells December 29 2011, 02:15:12 UTC
I was so sure I'd commented on this, but apparently not.

I love the snapshot mode of this. In spite of Adam's canon A grades, I like the impact this shows with the death of his mother, that Adam becomes labelled as a hopeless case, but his brothers - Sam especially - persevere for him. It was so precious watching Michael fall for Adam, then struggling to be morally upright and honourable. I love that Adam sees right through him.

I like that ending with the all the hope in their prospects of looking ahead to the future and I think these were my favourite lines: Michael will probably end up with a broken jaw but for Adam it will be worth it. “When we’ve been together about ten years Dean will come around.”

You writing teachers / teaching assistants / tutors so well. I hope you continue!

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bellacatbee December 29 2011, 15:54:18 UTC
Thank you!

I always want to write happy Winchester family fic but there's so much that they'd all have to get over to be a happy family, even in AUs but I'm glad that his brothers came across well and Adam's reaction to his mother's death was believable.

Michael just tries so hard to be honourable but with Adam around that would be hard.

I have to say that Dean line was one of my favourites as well.

Thank you! I'd hope I do because I'm a teacher's daughter so I have the upmost respect for teachers and now how hard the job can be. There is a Sam/Gabriel fic up on my journal in the universe and there should be a Dean/Castiel one to follow.

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babydracky March 8 2012, 10:24:34 UTC
*Sighs so very happily once again!*
This IS adorable!

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bellacatbee March 8 2012, 16:13:00 UTC
Thank you!

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bballgirl3022 April 8 2012, 03:36:08 UTC
Awww! Sweet fluff makes me incredibly happy :D

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bellacatbee April 9 2012, 11:32:59 UTC
I love writing sweet fluff. I don't do it enough. I'm glad you enjoyed this, honey!

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demira_watson April 8 2012, 04:41:03 UTC
*showers you with love*

This is perfection. Nothing else can describe it.

I adore the protective loving relationship between the brothers. I adore the angsty forbidden love between Michael and Adam. And I adore the epic mischief of Gabriel!

How can you be so awesome!?

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bellacatbee April 9 2012, 11:34:49 UTC
*Is loved*

I always love the brothers having a really good relationship. We just need it on the show too. So angsty and forbidden and Dean is very much going to punch Michael when he finds out. I just love Gabriel though all of these, he knows what everyone's doing!

I have a lot of time on my hands and I write fast?

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