WC Fic: Keeping Warm

Sep 12, 2010 14:20


White Collar -- Fanfiction

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No copyright infringement intended.

Title:  Keeping warm

  • Rating:  R
  • Warnings:  Adult content, nothing explicit; no slash
  • Category:  Dramedy, Bromance
Summary:

"Since when does Neal Caffrey ( Read more... )

gen, drama, white collar

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Comments 17

Great! anonymous September 26 2010, 00:32:12 UTC
I really enjoyed this and found the idea of Neal smoking pot very sexy .. very telling about his state of mind. I have a feeling that him willingly letting go of his control isn't something that's done often or easily.

Great job!

Dash

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Re: Great! bella_harvest September 26 2010, 04:23:31 UTC
Thanks so much. I admit, it's more of the HBO version of Neal rather than the USA version.

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Can't Pick a Favorite sk_musings October 30 2010, 23:35:54 UTC
This is the second time I have read this story. I love your version of Neal coping with the aftermath of his personal tragedy. Your choice of self destructive behaviors are exactly what I would expect of Neal. The awkward comfort and friendship offered by Peter was wonderfully depicted. I can't pick which one of your stories I like the best. They are wonderful and spot on for the characters. Thanks for writing them.

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jrosemary November 13 2010, 14:32:06 UTC
Beautifully done--and so believable. I can see Neal resorting to a joint and a high-end call girl, just as I can see Peter forcing Neal into an initially awkward but ultimately soothing and comforting bear hug.

Have you put this on any of the White Collar communities? White Collar Fan Fiction, http://community.livejournal.com/whitecollarfic/ , would be a great start, if you haven't already posted it there.

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bella_harvest November 13 2010, 15:12:38 UTC
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I haven't this or anything else in the WC communities yet, but I may in the future.

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virgo_79 May 30 2011, 04:38:49 UTC
Love this. It's such a micro-roller coaster of drama and humor, in just the right balance. Love the hug that last an eternity -- especially the way it turns out. and there *is* something oddly appealing aboutthe idea of Neal smoking pot.

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bella_harvest May 30 2011, 10:18:35 UTC
Yes, that turned out to be a pretty long hug! I can see readers checking their watches, thinking "Are they done yet?" ;) And I always like to speculate on the beyond-PG facets of Neal's character that we're not likely to see on the show. Thanks so much for reading and commenting. B

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kateneedscoffee June 14 2011, 18:08:27 UTC
pot smoking neal.. that has got to be the hottest thing ever :) love the story!

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bella_harvest June 14 2011, 18:21:51 UTC
I'd love to see him let his self-control slip on the show! Recreational drugs not necessarily required ... thanks for reading.

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