Comments | belenen: poem -- "thirst of earth, carelessness of stars"

belenen

Oct 09, 2007 23:55

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belenen October 22 2007, 19:04:26 UTC

ooohh, thank you so much! That means a lot because this is the first bit of poetry I've written in... at least 4 years, if not 5. *hugs* thanks!

bornbeautiful October 10 2007, 12:15:44 UTC

i love your writing. :) have you ever tried to get it published in a poetry magazine?

belenen October 22 2007, 19:05:19 UTC

a long long time ago, I have -- this is my first poem in 4 or 5 years! I'm glad my muse hasn't given up on me. ;-)

deleon October 10 2007, 14:22:37 UTC

Wow, your use of onemonopeias (sp?) and personification is wonderful!

belenen October 22 2007, 19:05:36 UTC

thanks so much! ♥

free2be October 11 2007, 21:30:27 UTC

It makes me thirsty.

belenen October 22 2007, 19:06:06 UTC

awesome, thanks for letting me know! that's what I was going for (and it makes me thirsty too). ♥