fic: proper firsts

Jun 26, 2010 11:18

“What are you doing?”

The Doctor, who had honestly thought that this was going to be a rather successful sneak attack, stops mid-stride with his tie dangling from his extended left hand. “Er. Nothing. Why don’t you, er…that is, weren’t you reading?”

Rose draws her eyebrows together, fixing him with a pointed stare over the top of her book. “ ( Read more... )

character: tenii, fanfiction: doctor who, character: rose tyler

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hoperomantic June 26 2010, 15:55:00 UTC
Very sweet, I love how you echoed their relationship with all the little touches and reflections of it in their first new "adventure." Thank you for sharing. *grin*

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beingfacetious June 26 2010, 23:19:35 UTC
Aw, thank you so much! I'm so glad it worked for you. :)

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sunnytyler001 June 26 2010, 16:31:26 UTC
Lovely!

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beingfacetious June 26 2010, 23:19:50 UTC
Thank you! :D

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beingfacetious June 27 2010, 21:25:56 UTC
Aw, thank you! :)

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ditte3 June 27 2010, 19:01:14 UTC
Oh it's cute.They are so good together.I like that they are injoying their time together just like in the old times.The "very burnedDoctor" made me smile.He has a pale skin,heeasily get burned.Hope Rose will gently put some cooling balm on him later.

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beingfacetious June 27 2010, 21:28:38 UTC
Thank you! Yeah, it was definitely important to me that they get to have some fun in their new world. :) And Rose will definitely do that, and will only be the tiniest bit mean about how cold it feels when it first goes on. ;)

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gwenchoco June 28 2010, 05:04:51 UTC
beingfacetious June 28 2010, 05:06:33 UTC
Thank you so much :) I'm glad you liked that part!

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