uherr, hi? ^^ I am Suri, if anybody was wondering who Suri was. Yes I draw the ugly little robots that neku and celectis always have flying around them
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Aaawwww... You should never call your stuff lame. It was adorable, worthy of good, soft fuzzies for the soul. ^_^ Stories like this make days that much better, and you were very brave in posting it. Thank you, m'dear.
Hey! I like those "ugly little robots" thank you very much. They = win. As does this fic. It's total fluff, but not overtly so. It leaves you with a feeling of wonder at what is between them. It doesn't seem like friendship. Very sweet. ^^
X3 thank you! they're just silly little doodles though D: ahh thank you for your compliments, it is very kind of you ^^ i guess that is what i was going for here, something a little less... what is the word... intense?
{The boy continued to stare into the blue and gold darkness that was his room} This is a fabulous example of how to write scenery. The description of not only what the room looks like, but the description of the feeling of the room.
{Although the most striking thing about the boy was his bright blue eyes, eerily enough, almost creating their own light.} This is exactly how I picture Bee's eyes. And it is very believable.
{but when he was expecting to feel the soft, pale skin, he saw that his hand had gone straight through him. Blue lights from the area his hand was touching furiously tried to repair the image.} This is my favorite line. The detail in this alone was very emotional.
Overall, I find this fiction to be ranked 9/10. I would definitely recommend many eager readers out there to check out this beautiful story. The detail you've captured for both characters was beyond perfect and the settings cooperated with the mood of the story. You are an amazing author.
Re: Truly Amazingsuri_kiJuly 25 2007, 04:52:11 UTC
aopnfpdoewnorinefwouefp9i[ ; A ; thank you SO MUCH. this really is such a compliment... i will try and write more later when i have time, but thankyouthankyouthankyouuuuu <3
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thank you :] i will enjoy myself i think
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*glomps* BTW: Your little robots kick ass!
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aheheheh ^^; thanks! i will see if i can draw more to post with neku and cel >.>
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ahh thank you for your compliments, it is very kind of you ^^ i guess that is what i was going for here, something a little less... what is the word... intense?
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{The boy continued to stare into the blue and gold darkness that was his room} This is a fabulous example of how to write scenery. The description of not only what the room looks like, but the description of the feeling of the room.
{Although the most striking thing about the boy was his bright blue eyes, eerily enough, almost creating their own light.} This is exactly how I picture Bee's eyes. And it is very believable.
{but when he was expecting to feel the soft, pale skin, he saw that his hand had gone straight through him. Blue lights from the area his hand was touching furiously tried to repair the image.} This is my favorite line. The detail in this alone was very emotional.
Overall, I find this fiction to be ranked 9/10. I would definitely recommend many eager readers out there to check out this beautiful story. The detail you've captured for both characters was beyond perfect and the settings cooperated with the mood of the story. You are an amazing author.
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i will try and write more later when i have time, but thankyouthankyouthankyouuuuu <3
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