Fic: Aegri Somnia

[ani_coolgirl]

Title: Aegri Somnia
Fandom: Transformers
Characters: Bumblebee, Sam, three seconds of Ratchet and .05 seconds of Mikaela.
Pairings: BeexSam
Word Count: 968
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None really, mentions of yummy images.
Summary: Before Sam, there were no dreams.
Author's Notes: I kinda threw this together at the last second in a desperate need to

Comments

[ani_coolgirl]

Thank you very much!

[jigsaws231]

Wow - that was great. A few skipped words - "protected Sam vicious rigor" is missing a "with a", I assume and "captured a tortured" is supposed to be "and".

Please don't kill me - everyone says they want constructive criticism but it's hard to tell if they actually do.

I LOVED the ending. Your descriptions of the dreams he might have are wonderful.

[ani_coolgirl]

:o Thank you for finding my mistakes! I skip over words ALL the time, and my brain just doesn't see it. I wouldn't kill you, I wub you!

Thank you for your love of the ending~

[dark_strelitzia]

Something about that last line left me grinning. :D I like this piece and would want to see more from you.

[ani_coolgirl]

I'll try to write more~ Thanks for the love!

[devilishkurumi]

I love parenthesis when they're pulled off in fics. BOY DID YOU PULL THEM OFF <3 I also love the concept of Autobot dreams and again woo did this play with 'em! Not enough lessthanthree to go around!

[ani_coolgirl]

I have a parenthesis fetish. :P Thanks!

[speechie42]

Bee's all trying to keep it cool, not telling Sam what his dreams are of, but then the kids like, "yeah, I dream about you." It made me laugh loudly. This was sweet and funny and cute. Thanks for sharing!

[ani_coolgirl]

Thank *you* for reading!

[speechie42]

*You* are very welcome ^^

[ani_coolgirl]

No, *you*! ~taking this too far~ ^^;