repairs 5

[tsumiden]

well her is part five, which only exists because Muzaiden spent long amounts of time talking with me in character for this, and helping out with the plot. it's unbeta'd but i appreciate any constructive critisicm

Comments

[lady_foxfire]

So what exactly is Halo? I'm assuming he's not exactly a normal child of the Allspark.

[tsumiden]

nope there's more than meetsthe eye about that little insect.

[x_salios_x]

good chapter, although some of the sentence structures seemed off, a little like you rambled here and there, the best of us do it though ;).
can't wait for the next chapter hun!

[tsumiden]

thank you, next chapter soon

woot

[nari_aizawa]

Yay, a new chapter! I'm glad the BeexSam is getting somewhere. ^_^ Please update soon!

Re: woot

[tsumiden]

yeah it took them a while to coperate and let other people see it
will update soon as i can

[lemonflav_lopfe]

I am happy that you've updated! The plot is really moving along and I'm interested in the way you're going to tie it all up together. Is Sam going to fix Sides?

[tsumiden]

thank you, i realy can's say whats goign to happen to sides in the long run but maybe :D

[mimi_sardinia]

As usual, I can't help but love the details revealed about the Earthborn, particularly the info about their conceptual ages and the hierarchy that has formed amongst them.

[tsumiden]

yep they have their own ways those little earthborn, glad yo uare enjoying this