Comments | been89: Poem written in chem

been89

Poem written in chem

Apr 12, 2005 21:42

Happily Ever After

Lost my senses on that windy road
the only thing able to arise
behind the fog was your exhausted eyes
You hummed to me, something too revealing
Slowly unraveling what seemed to be nearing

Have you ever been to that place?
Where your thoughts resound in the halls
Everything is no longer a fear
Even found meaning for that glass-like tear
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cant_turn_back April 13 2005, 03:31:30 UTC

I really really like that.

Awesome, Been. :)

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been89 April 13 2005, 23:27:21 UTC

aw tankies! ur awesome too!=p

blaming_fate April 13 2005, 23:17:28 UTC

sabeen, this poem is so thoughful (as your poems always are). and i love the imagery. my favorite line:

you hummed to me, something too revealing
slowly unraveling what seemed to be nearing

you're such an amazing poet. this could even be a song if you were to write music to it. i could see it as being the sort of song that i'd fall in love with and constantly play on my stereo because the lyrics are so good that i wouldn't be able to resist singing along.

so good. i love you.

been89 April 13 2005, 23:33:49 UTC

emilini you're too sweet! I was actually thinking of writing music to this, but I don't have that much time, but maybe one day we could do it together! and you have to show me ur poem too, they're always so inspiring and lovely as you! thank you so much, I value what you have to say so much. Everything you say means a lot and just rememeber, even in boston....WE THE FOXES ARE SUPERIOR!