Fic: Let The Light In (The Eagle, AU), Chapter 12

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Title: Let The Light In, Chapter 12
Pairing: Esca/Marcus
Rating: NC-17
Length: 6.5k
Warnings:
Summary: Marcus and Esca are acrobats performing in a Vegas circus spectacular, and Marcus is trying to figure out what's happening between them.

Comments

[delvinan]

I'm guessing there won't be more of this, which is so, so sad, because it's so very good, I mean, absolutely fantastic... I love how each character has his/her own voice (e.g. Noz's perfect but slightly stilted English, and even including Québecois swear-words!), how everything about this world is so full of utterly convincing detail. Marcus and Esca's interactions are so intense and erotic, while at the same time there are these lovely touches of humour, such as, to quote but one gem from this last part:

Which is why I've figured out I owe you an apology.” The fingers dug deeper and more painfully, like Esca couldn't say he was sorry for anything without exacting some revenge.

In a way we have reached the beginning of a resolution here, but I'm sure there was originally more planned for these too, which I'm very sad may never now see the light of day. I'd hoped Marcus's mum would come and see the show, and that more of the developing dynamic would unfold. If there ever were the chance you'd pick thisup again, I'd be thrilled to bits - although no matter what I'm grateful for what you have given us here. Thank you.