Fic: The Ties that Bind, Chapter 11, Kirk/Spock, COMPLETE

[beederiffic]

Title: The Ties that Bind, Chapter 11/11
Pairings: Kirk/Spock
Rating: NC-17
Length: 9.5k (of circa 80k in total)
For: awarrington, always ♥
Warnings: More therapy
Summary: The Enterprise crew makes contact with a planet where an all-male society thinks they're sexual catnip, and decides to keep and marry them all against their will
A/N: The Chulu will be

Comments

[chibinecco]

d'aawwwwww *snuggles them both* *snuggles you too* feel better, this is GORGEOUS. It really is. Noticed a few weird tense problems that make it unclear who's doing the action, but FAR better edited than I get when I'm sick and/or tired.

PS HAWT!!

[beederiffic]

Yay snuggles ^^

I had a read-thru and didn't see anything that jumped out at me, would it be a PITA to DM me the bits that didn't make sense? *panda eyes*

You keep saying this 'edited' word like I'll know what it is...

[chibinecco]

You keep saying this 'edited' word like I'll know what it is...
LMAO XD and I have NO idea where they are after the fact XD If you'd like me to give it a readthrough and point stuff out, I think the best way to do it would be if I copypasta'd the chapter into a gdoc and left comments if you're at all familiar with gdocs and wouldn't mind it being hosted there in that abstract "permanence" that is how the interwebz works.

[beederiffic]

Don't stress it boo, I'm tempted to believe that you were so over-awed by my smokin' hot porn that any clause mistakes existed solely in your hot lil head :P

Nah, I'll leave it a week for some distance and have a read-over to see if anything catches my eye. Not that I have an issue with gdocs, it just seems like a hassle for a few wibbly bits that I'll probably catch later. But thanks for the offer <3

[chibinecco]

lol XD Fair enough, feel free to ask me to edit whenever you feel you need it again though. I'm more than happy to get to read your work a couple days early *grin* XD