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Nov 05, 2006 18:29


Title: Stupid Boundaries in Life, Part 2: Morning comes around.
Author:(me)
Pairing: Billie/Tre
Rating: Sorry no sex but implied and some angst but that what I am all about.
Disclaimer: SO not ture!
Notes: due to popular demand I have added more and will prob make this a short mini-series; also I am feeling inspired by this story line of some reason.

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suebot November 5 2006, 18:39:08 UTC
I like this.
It's different.
Keep it coming.

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beecat November 5 2006, 19:29:45 UTC
XD thanks, glad ya liked it! I will do my best to write more.

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jimmy_tinsel November 5 2006, 21:26:35 UTC
Ya, know, everyone loves a Whore!Billie, but I haven't really seen anyone actually right him up as one. I really like this story :P

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beecat November 6 2006, 17:58:13 UTC
thanks i had an idea n just went with it, he just seemed to develop as i wrote it. And kinda at the end of the first part i was reminded of Pretty Woman, but i decided to go all ansty instead!
XD

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beecat November 6 2006, 17:54:32 UTC
oh im so glad! i thought it was a lil shit, but people like it they really like it!!
XD

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trelover November 6 2006, 18:30:46 UTC
I love this so much!keep going:)

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beecat November 6 2006, 19:05:09 UTC
glad ya do! i will continue at some point when i have written more
XD

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obviouslytomark November 6 2006, 22:31:55 UTC
i think it's a good story, i like their relationship.

also, i think you need to change the R's in yes, back to S's, instead of "yer". well they looked like r's to me anyways. maybe i'm just a crazy. but anyways, i just wanted to help you out with that one.

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beecat November 7 2006, 11:03:24 UTC
Thanks

Oh and I just looked thought it and the doctor, wasn't suppose to be a 'YER' but the one Tre says is suppose to be in there because Tre kind of gulps it in sadness; and a 'yes' seems too confident to me.
And 'Yer it’s the room' is suppose to be there as well because Billie is supposed to sound a little common-ish.

So yes that that. Thank you for you comments they are appreciated.

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