Sleep Deprivation
Here is our entry for this week's Cloudscape Comic Battle. The theme is Sleep Deprivation which I know a little something about. Written by Dave wilypueo and drawn by me.
Title: Flight of the Damned
Panel 1 Byron in Pajamas standing by Dave, who is sitting at a small table, reading Moby Dick on his Nook [bonus points if you can show that].
Byron: Aren't you going to sleep? We have an early flight tomorrow.
Dave: Nah--I'll sleep better on the plane if I just stay up.
Panel 2 Close up of Dave's head and shoulders. Head tilted back and snoring.
Caption: Ten Hours Later . . .
Dave: Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Panel 3 Zoomed out panel showing Byron on one side of Dave looking steamed and friend [your choice] on other side of Dave also steamed.
Dave: Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Panel 4 Zoomed out even further. Showing other unhappy passengers (cariacature/stick figure style) on plane. Unidentified Little Girl sitting far/furthest away from Dave.
Dave: Zzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Unidentified little girl: Mommy, can you make the Bad Man stop?
[You can drop this panel if you deem it unecessary/not adding much. Also try to play around with the font/lettering for the "Zzzzzzzz"/snoring sound. Less direction this time for layout, since you've been ignoring most of that anyway . . .]
Title: Flight of the Damned
Panel 1 Byron in Pajamas standing by Dave, who is sitting at a small table, reading Moby Dick on his Nook [bonus points if you can show that].
Byron: Aren't you going to sleep? We have an early flight tomorrow.
Dave: Nah--I'll sleep better on the plane if I just stay up.
Panel 2 Close up of Dave's head and shoulders. Head tilted back and snoring.
Caption: Ten Hours Later . . .
Dave: Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Panel 3 Zoomed out panel showing Byron on one side of Dave looking steamed and friend [your choice] on other side of Dave also steamed.
Dave: Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Panel 4 Zoomed out even further. Showing other unhappy passengers (cariacature/stick figure style) on plane. Unidentified Little Girl sitting far/furthest away from Dave.
Dave: Zzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Unidentified little girl: Mommy, can you make the Bad Man stop?
[You can drop this panel if you deem it unecessary/not adding much. Also try to play around with the font/lettering for the "Zzzzzzzz"/snoring sound. Less direction this time for layout, since you've been ignoring most of that anyway . . .]