HAHA no sorries, I'm really happy that someone laughed at some part of this silly little thing - and Mr. Mew is so gd terrifying and so, so underused. I had to twist him around a bit. >:)
I paused at the word "paw" and shook my head, thinking I was probably over analyzing it. But gosh! I'm still wonderfully surprised. Thanks for this. ^-^
Haha! Thank you for taking the time to comment; I´m glad you enjoyed the fic.
I was a bit worried about the twist - I wanted to hint at it a little bit. Do you think it was a good balance of hinting and leaving things vague? Or should I have interspersed more little references throughout?
And for the vagueness versus hinting, that really depends on the effect you want on your readers. If you want a big shock factor, leave it as is; that single "paw" clue is just enough for those who are looking to get the hint and for those who aren't to go @.@. If you want the reader to suspect but doubt until the end a few more hints would be nice, but use them sparingly. Personally, I like the story as it is now, but if you go back to revise however you like, I'd love to give it another go.
Ooh, nice one ^^ I did figure out somewhere around "paw" and never stopped grinning from there on. I think you don't have to worry about the hints - it's just fine. And a very funny idea.
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You win. Here I was thinking that it was some Reaper being like "yeeeah I'mma raep you" and then it turns out to be Mr. Mew.
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I paused at the word "paw" and shook my head, thinking I was probably over analyzing it. But gosh! I'm still wonderfully surprised. Thanks for this. ^-^
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I was a bit worried about the twist - I wanted to hint at it a little bit. Do you think it was a good balance of hinting and leaving things vague? Or should I have interspersed more little references throughout?
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And for the vagueness versus hinting, that really depends on the effect you want on your readers. If you want a big shock factor, leave it as is; that single "paw" clue is just enough for those who are looking to get the hint and for those who aren't to go @.@. If you want the reader to suspect but doubt until the end a few more hints would be nice, but use them sparingly. Personally, I like the story as it is now, but if you go back to revise however you like, I'd love to give it another go.
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also I haven't run into gfete before! Mind giving me the rundown on what it means?
And thank you very much for commenting ♥
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GFETE=Grin From Ear To Ear. LOL is so...misleading. :/
You are quite welcome! Always nice to spread the love, in my opinion.
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