Twenty-Eighth Breakdown

[beckyh2112]

Title: Fabled Kaon
Fandom: Transformers G1
Characters: Breakdown, Spindledrop, mentions of other Stunticons
Word Count: 3043
Rating: G
Summary: Everyone can find what they're looking for in fabled Kaon, even paranoid, Earth-loving carbois.
Author's Notes: This is also 'On Vacation Breakdown', the last Breakdown fic I have for the twenty-eight

Comments

[dragoness_e]

Oh very, very nice! This has almost a Leigh Brackett feel to it. Well done!

[lunatron]

Some of the names really amuse me, and so the gender inversions.

[beckyh2112]

Amusing names? *headtilts*

[sapphirebreeze]

I think I do like the end best, along with the mindset that his tourguide should vanish and never be seen before.

I suppose that it's worth mentioning that if I'm writing or RPing it, 'Damn,' 'Hell,' and 'Oh, gods' are Cybertronian swears. They get used plenty of times in canon by characters who have no reason to be familiar with Terran swears. >_>

[ravynfyre]

Very very nice. I loved all the little scene details and the amusing little cameos you slipped in there. And the beginning made me feel sorry for poor Breakdown and his spoiled vacation... It's nice to see him get what he wanted.

Spindledrop was fun! And rather perceptive, too! Of course, any shrewd businessmech would have to be shrewd to survive amidst all the rest of the glitter and flash and opportunities that make the city hum. Not to mention having to be smart to make it as a Neutral in modern times.

I like it. Very nicely done. Thank you.

[missrao]

Very nice. I felt like a tourist too. Good characterisation. I think Dead End is more proactive then he claims. He moves, after all. And refuels. Old cities are nice.