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May 14, 2007 12:31

Title: He Lived
Author: becky_H
Character: Jack
Rating: PG
Spoilers: No
Warning: None
Summary: He lived
Author's Notes: 150 word drabble, companion piece to He Died

( Across a thousand worlds and a million years, on silver sand and beneath golden skies, he lived )

Comments 28

anonymous May 14 2007, 17:15:05 UTC

He lived. Across a thousand worlds and a million years, on silver sand and beneath golden skies, he lived.

That is so beautiful. Thank you!

becky_writing May 14 2007, 17:16:24 UTC

I'm really glad you liked it - Thank you for letting me know.

shrinax May 14 2007, 17:39:51 UTC

I adore the last line of this short story
Powerful words :)

becky_writing May 14 2007, 17:40:34 UTC

Thanks. It was going somewhere once upon a time and then. Well that line happened and it stopped.

shrinax May 14 2007, 17:41:31 UTC

That line makes a perfect ending!
xx

becky_writing May 14 2007, 17:42:37 UTC

Thanks for confirming that for me. It makes me feel hugely better about it.

matsujo9 May 14 2007, 17:48:49 UTC

* comments officially *

I especially love the third paragraph because of the contrasts. Wonderfully done.

becky_writing May 14 2007, 17:57:50 UTC

Thank you *so* much.

A lovely follow up amazonx May 14 2007, 18:16:06 UTC

to the companion story, which was just as beautiful!

Re: A lovely follow up becky_writing May 14 2007, 18:16:40 UTC

Thank you, very much. I'm glad you enjoyed them.

sunnyrea May 14 2007, 18:25:37 UTC

I read the other one as well but I like this one a lot more. It had a good spark and really did feel alive! Lovely

becky_writing May 14 2007, 18:26:39 UTC

I liked this one a lot more, too. - I actually wrote (most of it) first. Sadly, it didn't even kind of fit an alternative life scenario and I gave up.

I'm glad you enjoyed it!