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beckaandzac

Fic: follow you until you love me (for j2_remix, semi-AU, NC-17)

Oct 15, 2009 19:57

HEY LOOK! A remix fic!

Title: Follow you until you love me
Pairing: Jensen/Jared
Rating: NC-17
Remixing: Listen Through Silence by lazy_dazeSummary: Jensen doesn’t like crowds, and he prefers to be in places with smaller groups of people he knows. He doesn’t think that’s unusual; he doesn’t think he needs a babysitter at public functions because of it ( Read more... )

rpf, j2, nc-17, remix

Comments 47

poor_choices October 16 2009, 00:37:31 UTC

OH CREEPER JARED ♥♥♥ I really love the image of him with the PLASTIC KNIFE--it just does things to me! And, of course, the cuddling! Seriously, this was awesome ♥

beckaandzac October 16 2009, 23:31:06 UTC

Jared is hot with plastic weaponry. TRUFAX.

I'm sooo glad you liked it!! <333

lazy_daze October 16 2009, 04:11:49 UTC

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA OMG I LOVE YOU A WHOLE LOT. S;DHG;ADG;ADGJDJGDVNLERYTLGH!!!!! I so so love what you've done with this. OMFG. Really awesome *_*. Creepy adorable wonderful Jared!!!!! Reluctant but kinda-loving-it Jensen! YOU. Eeeeeee. ♥

beckaandzac October 16 2009, 23:35:25 UTC

I LOVE YOU MOOOORE. Sam, seriously, I'm SO GLAD you liked this! I was so worried about making Jared either too creepy or not creepy enough. So, YAY!!

earth_dragon October 16 2009, 08:39:12 UTC

"... anyone who cuddles as enthusiastically as Jared does is unlikely to be a serial killer." This is how I judge all of my bed partners. TOTALLY TRUFAX! It's sound reason. *nod nod*

Also, I KINDA LOVE THIS FIC LIKE JARED LOVES JENSEN!!!

beckaandzac October 16 2009, 23:37:12 UTC

I think it's an important criterion! I mean, CUDDLING. :D

THANK YOU!

joans23 October 16 2009, 09:31:35 UTC

This is seriously so awesome! It feels like Jared's behavior should be just a little creepy, but it's just ... Jared! LOL! Awesome writing!

beckaandzac October 16 2009, 23:38:57 UTC

Thank you! Jared is so well-meaning, he cannot be REALLY creepy. I'm so glad you liked it. :)

strangeallure October 16 2009, 13:09:52 UTC

I really liked lazy_daze's story, and I love what you did with it.

Making it more about Jensen, making him catching on quicker and amping up the angst and creepiness, yet not losing the tenderness.

I like that Jared is not as good at reading Jensen as he thinks, it really emphasizes the stalker-like quality, makes it a little more easy to recognize within the confines of the story; and I like how torn Jensen is between wanting Jared, seeing that he truly means well, and knowing that this is probably not a healthy type of relationship.

Their last conversation I liked especially, oscillating (in a nicely understated way) between buddy-like, confrontational, confessional and programatic for the future, and it's great how you use Jared's "Let me", making it about permission, but also coaxing and maybe even a little manipulative.

Great job.

beckaandzac October 16 2009, 23:48:43 UTC

I found some of the reaction to lazy_daze's story so interesting because there were people saying "OMG Jared's so manipulative and weird," but in the story, it's JARED. You know he's not coming from a bad place, you know he's not a bad person! But how does Jensen know that, you know?

Thank you SO MUCH for commenting!