Jul 10, 2006 12:10
Ok, so instead of working on my PBFE thing last night, I got all caught up in my newest craze and wrote quite a bit of that. Only now I want to know if what I wrote came across clearly before I continue. I'm not asking for a beta, just someone willing to have a look and say: 'So what you're saying is this...' And then help me talk out some plot development.
It's a piece centred on Sara's personal development. Not terribly shippy in these early stages, but she might go on to get down and dirty with one (or both) of the brothers, but only if her character requires it for some reason.
Takers?