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slybrunette November 17 2007, 21:55:58 UTC
But you’re Angela and party planer is in your title and without your title you’re not sure what you’d have left, because your cat is dead and your boyfriend has a tiny “ex” tacked on the front and the two are related which is really what you’re having trouble with.

Very true.

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bebitched November 17 2007, 22:09:17 UTC
Is that code for you liked it?

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slybrunette November 18 2007, 01:45:20 UTC
Code for "I'm busy but I felt bad for not reviewing at all so this is my review"

But also yes.

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bebitched November 18 2007, 02:29:00 UTC
Hmm. Okay, thanks!

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bebitched November 18 2007, 02:25:30 UTC
Thanks!

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michellek November 18 2007, 06:02:12 UTC
Oh, Angela. ♥ I love this. The last line works especially well.

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bebitched November 18 2007, 20:14:03 UTC
Thanks!

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angryhaiku November 20 2007, 03:52:33 UTC
Aw, Angela. I love this treatment of her as wanting to unbend, kind of, but being afraid of losing her identity. This is so much more compelling and interesting than the standard "rigid and judge-y," but it doesn't lose the characterization and that's kind of amazing.

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bebitched November 20 2007, 04:10:11 UTC
Thank you so much! It's always nice to hear that I'm doing something a little out of the norm, but still in keeping with cannon.

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diachrony November 20 2007, 21:55:07 UTC
I think this is wonderful. Really well done!

I did notice a typo: "planer" should be "planner."

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bebitched November 27 2007, 02:07:48 UTC
Thank you! And thanks for catching that, I hate having typoes in my fic.

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