it's the dirtiest clean i know (alice/bella) r

[bebitched]

title:  it's the dirtiest clean i know
fandom: twilight
character(s)/pairing(s): alice/bella, mentions of edward/bella
rating: light r 
word count: 1394
spoilers: set between twilight and new moon 
author's note: title from feist's "my moon, my man"
summary: bella needs some help showering after she breaks her leg in phoenix. luckily, alice is

Comments

[peskywhistpaw]

It's funny, I was actually craving Alice/Bella fic about the very scenario this fic deals with. So, excellent timing! :D

Anyway, I love the way you've depicted their relationship - how Alice is finding fault in everything from Bella's underwear to her shampoo because they aren't fancy enough. I also love how the scene is so intimate, and sexual in a subtle, UST kind of way.

My particular favorite parts are:

I trusted her because she trusted herself.

and

Alice met my eyes and smiled reassuringly, though I could tell she was flustered by the shade of her eyes the way someone could read it in my flushed cheeks.

[bebitched]

LOL well I'm glad I've tapped into the greater A/B shipper consciousness :)

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

[rennaise]

So nice.
Sensual without being overtly sexual. I love the exploration here. . .and you can take that however you think I mean it. You're probably right.
Mmm, the strawberry shampoo. No smell like it. That really struck the olfactory nerve!

[bebitched]

Thanks hon! So glad you enjoyed this!