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Jul 22, 2008 15:37

Title: Playback, Delete, and Rewind
Pairing: Cho/Various (including Cedric, of course)
Rating: PG-13
Summary: History has a peculiar way of repeating itself.
Notes: Weird pairings amidst canon ones. Also there’s a pattern in this story. Kudos to those who find it.
Disclaimer: Not mine. Not mine at all. Title belongs to Circa Survive.

Cho Chang is taught to never believe in magic. )

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cityscripts July 23 2008, 06:38:30 UTC
You did a wonderful job capturing the emotions of Cho - anguish, the beginnings of a crush, optimism, sadness. Good job.

The last line was a sucker punch, though. Such a bittersweet line...

But I love how you've made Cho signify the value of death rather than birthdays - a symbol of life. That, in itself, was quite sad.

“Cedric Diggory. I will never forget him.”

And it's not because they were madly in love, but because without him, it symbolizes everything she could've had, but ultimately lost. That was also quite sad.

Anyway, I have no idea what I've just said (other than gush over the bittersweet tone of it all), but good job. I certainly wouldn't mind seeing another Cho/Cedric from you. :)

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beautyisillness July 23 2008, 07:55:06 UTC
Awww, thank you for the comment :)

Yeah, with this story, I was tampering with the idea of irony/foreshadowing, although I wouldn't say that I executed it well, at least I attempted to try it. :|

Anywho, I'm ecstatic you sent feedback! (I'm pretty sure you cringed at the crack!side pairings though) Once again, thank you so much.

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