Your fic was great! It started out sweet with some angst then got hot. And yes, the ep kissing is a great muse. I liked that you had JT's reluctance included. You should write more. :)
Edit: I wanted to let you know I added an author tag for you, so you can go back and add it to this post to help people find your fic(s) in the future. I look forward to more. Let me or msvalerieanne (other mod) know if you need anything.
Thank you. I added the tag. I truly hope to write more of these two because I love the show and I hope it continues into a second season. I haven't heard anything! *crosses fingers*
Thanks for the add. I added you back! Thanks again..
Oh and I went back over your fic. I think you typed out that he has blue eyes...I think Jay's are hazel-ish. I like the "Be my guest"...it makes me think of the Disney version and I start singing. That part makes me really happy. :)
Edit: I wanted to let you know I added an author tag for you, so you can go back and add it to this post to help people find your fic(s) in the future. I look forward to more. Let me or msvalerieanne (other mod) know if you need anything.
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Thanks for the add. I added you back!
Thanks again..
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https://sites.google.com/site/savebatb/ explains it. :)
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I truly hope it helps; couldn't hurt, right?
Thanks.
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Oh and I went back over your fic. I think you typed out that he has blue eyes...I think Jay's are hazel-ish. I like the "Be my guest"...it makes me think of the Disney version and I start singing. That part makes me really happy. :)
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OMG! That didn't even occur to me, but that's pretty cool~ *smiles*
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