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[beatsofburden]

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[mambo_penguins]

It's a little interesting read mine.

buy anything i
don't want to go but then i
get nervous again

Ur,I don't know maybe not.

[beatsofburden]

hmmm.. what's actually interesting is the rest of the entry my haiku came from.

I just needed one more word.

Drunk on the rooftop of a Mexican hostel. Drunk off of Cuban rum and Columbian Salsa. Down the spiral tornado is a woman who reminds me of a girl, a Heaven that reminds me of a Helen. And I crouch up here by the hammocks & sleeping dogs because I know she is but a similie, a fused connection in the webs of my brain & life & she will never be in reality what she is in my mind.

[mambo_penguins]

That would have made it more interesting but then it wouldn't be a haiku.