TL;DR the plot is something that both myself and Grell mun will be going through in greater detail together, but I personally think one should wait before they crit someone on a plot they don't know all of the details about/have their source inquire about it even more. Even what I wrote above isn't the whole plot, simply because I'm feeling long winded and like I said, details are still being worked out. Just be rest assured it's not simply because Beatrice is bored and wants to off some people. It's not.
As for her personality, yes, I'll admit she was stuck in a rut for a bit and that is my fault. As a mun I was personally stuck thanks to the original Battler mun idling out for a month and having brought him back earlier before just to deny her before telling me they wanted to drop and yet not doing so officially. It's hard to work with a character like Beatrice when you're having issues with a castmate who's vital/can affect their mood/personality so easily. I've gone over some stuff with her, got more inspiration and I feel her muse coming back much better than before. She's been in a far more playful, devious mood - for example her mistletoe plot which the whole game seemed to enjoy along with her laughing along with turning Black mask into a pony temporarily for Rainbow Dash, which both muns seemed to enjoy as well.
I know in the past I faltered a bit with her voice, but I know recently I've stepped it up. If you're speaking of past posts then yes, I can agree to some, but her most recent post was filled with a disgusting amount of metaphor, she insinuated and implied various things and was kind/cruel to others, depending on who it was she was speaking to.
TL;DR because this has gotten way too long, but I've recognized a bunch of these points myself and I'm glad you've pointed a few out to me, I just haven't, until recently been able to work on them given certain circumstances ICly and naturally OOCly. There is also the fact she's been undergoing changes via SP that naturally happen if someone's stuck in a place for 10 months. I'll continue to work on her voice, (I always forget to have her repeat herself, although I remember doing it before) and I'll keep the other things in mind. I hope none of this came off as bitchy, for that wasn't my intent at all! I'm just tired and whatnot. Thanks for giving time to write this in the first place!
TL;DR the plot is something that both myself and Grell mun will be going through in greater detail together, but I personally think one should wait before they crit someone on a plot they don't know all of the details about/have their source inquire about it even more. Even what I wrote above isn't the whole plot, simply because I'm feeling long winded and like I said, details are still being worked out. Just be rest assured it's not simply because Beatrice is bored and wants to off some people. It's not.
As for her personality, yes, I'll admit she was stuck in a rut for a bit and that is my fault. As a mun I was personally stuck thanks to the original Battler mun idling out for a month and having brought him back earlier before just to deny her before telling me they wanted to drop and yet not doing so officially. It's hard to work with a character like Beatrice when you're having issues with a castmate who's vital/can affect their mood/personality so easily. I've gone over some stuff with her, got more inspiration and I feel her muse coming back much better than before. She's been in a far more playful, devious mood - for example her mistletoe plot which the whole game seemed to enjoy along with her laughing along with turning Black mask into a pony temporarily for Rainbow Dash, which both muns seemed to enjoy as well.
I know in the past I faltered a bit with her voice, but I know recently I've stepped it up. If you're speaking of past posts then yes, I can agree to some, but her most recent post was filled with a disgusting amount of metaphor, she insinuated and implied various things and was kind/cruel to others, depending on who it was she was speaking to.
TL;DR because this has gotten way too long, but I've recognized a bunch of these points myself and I'm glad you've pointed a few out to me, I just haven't, until recently been able to work on them given certain circumstances ICly and naturally OOCly. There is also the fact she's been undergoing changes via SP that naturally happen if someone's stuck in a place for 10 months. I'll continue to work on her voice, (I always forget to have her repeat herself, although I remember doing it before) and I'll keep the other things in mind. I hope none of this came off as bitchy, for that wasn't my intent at all! I'm just tired and whatnot. Thanks for giving time to write this in the first place!
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