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She Loves You?

May 18, 2009 08:47

Title: She Loves You? PART 5
Author: macca44552
Pairing: J/P, G/OC, P/OC
Rating: NC-17

Summary: A naive fan, thinking that she is going to win the heart of Paul McCartney, walks into something quite odd...

A/N: There’s some stuff about religion in this one. It is just fiction. It doesn’t reflect my personal views. For the most part, everything is ( Read more... )

paul/other, het, george/other, john/paul

Comments 9

cianawho70 May 18 2009, 13:25:51 UTC

I'm liking your story!

I would cut off my left pinky toe to watch John and Paul... :)
She could be one lucky girl if she would get her head out of her ass and loosen up!

macca44552 May 19 2009, 12:38:25 UTC

Your left pinky toe?!!!

That seems a little rash, doesn't it?!!

lol ;D

I'd cut off mine too.

beatlesfan2808 May 18 2009, 19:26:19 UTC

this is so COOL!!! i dont give fuck i they're queer or not. i mean i go to church every sunday yet i have a lot gay and bi friends and i my self thinks im starting to turn bi. besides doesnt the bible say we should love everybody?

corleoned May 18 2009, 23:52:40 UTC

Damn, the first few paragraphs got me all hot and bothered xD
Oooooh, and I love your 'Sees-Through-All-Shit-Lennon'. He owns x3

Now if only your protagonist would get her head out of her ass.xP

macca44552 May 19 2009, 02:44:39 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad I managed to elicit a responce with the sexy dream sequence. I was soooo nervous that it would just flop.

whitekpopbunni May 19 2009, 03:18:31 UTC

Haha i cracked up when John quoted Kara's "I'M IN THE SHOWER" in the airplane bathroom.

ringoisim May 29 2009, 05:02:28 UTC

I'm liking this story :D
Favourite part of this chapter :

I opened my door and walked out into the living room. I stopped. On the couch sat John Lennon, perfectly awake, and he was writing something in a small notebook. Perched upon his nose were the funniest black glasses that I had ever seen. I giggled.

He looked at me with a shocked expression. His face made me laugh even more and pretty soon I was doubled over on the floor.

“What’re you goin’ on about?!” he demanded.

“Your glasses!” I pointed at the awful things on his face and looked up at him through squinted eyes.

“Shut the fuck up ye lousy bitch!”

LMAO.

macca44552 May 29 2009, 13:40:28 UTC

Thanks! :D Gotta love Lennon.