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Orange Collision

Jun 23, 2011 01:47

Title: Orange Collision

Pairings: John/Paul, George/Ringo Equal time for both pairings
Rating: NC-17

Warnings: sexual situations, drug and alcohol use, language, distressing situations

Summary: En route to Los Angeles, a storm diverts the Beatles to an uncharted island in the middle of the Pacific. Finding themselves among the few survivors, ( Read more... )

george/ringo, rating: nc-17, john/paul

Comments 30

miss_lizzy777 June 23 2011, 06:34:06 UTC

Virginity?

miss_lizzy777 June 23 2011, 06:35:09 UTC

Yes! Okay. All I have to say is... OMFG CLIFFHANGER. I kind of expect Mal to come back as a zombie or something horrible like that after that dramatic ending XD

macca44552 June 26 2011, 20:49:19 UTC

Zombie Mal? Haha, that would be entertaining, indeed. But I wouldn't rule out the possibility that something might be up with him. XD

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banterknave June 23 2011, 07:15:19 UTC

MAL MAL MAL MAL MAL MAL MAL! MAL!

Thank fucking GOD that man has made an appearance.
But shame on Mal for making an entrance at entirely the wrong moment - They were about to 'do' it! Well, they should have.

This was short, but super sweet. We needed some Ringo/George time. Over due. OHMYGOD BABY! I bet George is like "dfjghdkjfh" about the baby consuming Ringo's horn-i-fied-mind. Well, I am.

I like the name Pineapple.

I HAVE A VACATION COMING UP IN A COUPLE WEEKS. PARTY?

macca44552 June 26 2011, 20:52:04 UTC

Yes, Mal did pick a rather inconvenient time to make an appearance, but at least he's here, yes? XD

Pineapple? I'll ask George if he likes it. XD

FUCK YES. PARTAY SOON!

rockxandxroller June 23 2011, 07:39:40 UTC

First of all, thank you so much for updating. I've missed this story so much. ;__; It's so weird that you updated now, though. I've been checking B!S every day for an update ever since the last one, but I gave up a few days ago. It wasn't until just now that I checked it again, refreshed once, and it was here. :'D Basically, my reaction:

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macca44552 June 26 2011, 20:54:16 UTC

Bah, thank you! I loved all the Doctor Who gifs and such--your excitement has made me extremely happy. Sorry that it took so long for me to update, I'll try to get better. salfja;s

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quazonic June 23 2011, 08:34:39 UTC

“Hey George,” he mumbled, still eyeing the rings, “Which one of me rings is your favorite?”

LOLOLOL *mind drifts to dirty places*

GRRRRRRRR GRUMPY GEORGE. WHAT'S GOT HIS KNICKERS IN A TWIST? And if you mentioned it in the last chapter or so, I'm sorry, it's been a while. *hint* >:D

The water splashed noisily in his ears and he looked at the rock beneath him, stroking it randomly.

MY EYES NEARLY BUGGED OUT OF MY HEAD WHEN I READ THIS. RINGO/ROCK!

Awwwwwwwwwwwwww Ringo and Ringo's kid! ............ Whatever, kids are annoying. >:D

CALL THE KID "PENIS". And omgomgomg MAL IS BACK. HE'D BETTER CAUSE SOME PIP.

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macca44552 June 26 2011, 21:24:22 UTC

LOL, it would.

George is mad because Ringo hasn't been giving him enough attention. Basically, Ringo's been treating him like a mate and George is a bit put off by this because he thought things would change between them, thanks to the mutual agreement thingy.

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL. YES. RINGO/ROCK. CLEARLY THE HOTTEST COUPLE ON THE ISLAND.

YES, I'M SURE RINGO WILL AGREE TO CALL HIS KID PENIS. AND MAL'S RETURN WILL INDEED CAUSE SOME PAIN. >:D

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ext_531986 June 23 2011, 12:44:02 UTC

Oh my goodness, Loved Loved LOVED this chapter!

First off: beginning the chapter with Ringo bathing in the ocean is not a bad image at all to start off with! :)

Then Ringo steps out of the ocean, and things are, once again, awkward between him and George, they even bring Brian unwittingly into their bizarre scenarios, poor Brian!

“No, he has to get dressed first.” George all afraid he'd be oggling a half-naked Ringo on the walk, lol ( ... )

macca44552 June 26 2011, 21:19:30 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad that you liked this chapter! :D

I agree about the image. >:D

Yeah, I wanted people to think that he was going to give the ring to George (and I'm sure that's what George thought too ;D). But he was thinking about Zak.

The next chapter takes George's POV, so you'll be able to see the events that led him to change his mind about his anger towards Ringo. But you're right--who can understand George's thought processes?

George and Ringo, from this point on, will have plenty of time to slash up the island, don't you worry. XD

<333 Thank you!