Comments | beatlesslash: Band on the Run, Ch. 4: "Every Rock on the Way"

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Band on the Run, Ch. 4: "Every Rock on the Way"

May 24, 2010 00:23

I'm FINALLY back! And this is actually kind of just a filler bit cause they were spending WAAAY too long on that goddamn train.

Title: "Band on the Run Ch. 4"
Author: Darth Viye
Pairings: John/George,John/Paul, John/Ringo if you squint
Rating: R for this chapter
Timeframe: AU
Summary: The Beatles are among the most feared gangs in the nation, ( Read more... )

john/george, john/paul

Comments 7

OH LAWL. tssktssktssk May 23 2010, 20:31:04 UTC

AHAHA.
<3
Funny shit.
Love that last line.

John hoped they hit every fucking rock on the way down, the bastards.

<3333 MURKMURKMURKMURK.

Re: OH LAWL. tssktssktssk May 23 2010, 20:31:58 UTC

OH SHIT.
COMMENT VIRGINITY.

AND I MEANT TO PUT THAT IN ITALICS.

John hoped they hit every fucking rock on the way down, the bastards.

THAR.

grl_in_red May 24 2010, 06:59:45 UTC

You torture us! Oh you do! xD This was gorgeous but oh so not nearly enough! Please more more MORE!

I love Paul's craziness. <3

larainefan May 24 2010, 15:03:30 UTC

I'm glad you're continuing with this!

theastolat May 24 2010, 15:47:57 UTC

Alright. I'll comment. I was going to anyway, after I read the first chapter, but it looked like you didn't respond to fanmail and then I thought, sod it. But since you asked:

Now why the fuck was that chapter so short? I was havin the best time reading this. After reading chapter 3 I thought, sweet, now I'm up to the latest chapter and it's gonna be even more awesome and then I open it and it's like a sentence long. WTF.

I fucking came after the first chapter. Everything was gorgeous. I love the John/Paul/George triangle. Like, fucking love it. The dynamic is intense and raw and oddly parallels reality. Paul did kind of push himself on John, claimed him as his own, his discovery. Paul's the one who brought them together. I'd like to see how George got into this group just to get a better idea of where his affection for John comes from.

Your descriptions of George are making me claw and clench at my own thighs. Fuck.

Well, there you go. That's my comment. I expect some thanks for it. :P

O: darth_viye May 25 2010, 05:42:30 UTC

I JUST HAD A COMMENTGASM. MUST. REMEMBER. HOW. TO. BREATHE.
Thank you so much!!

Re: O: darth_viye May 25 2010, 05:43:45 UTC

And this was originally supposed to be part of what's now chapter 5, but I hit a block BUT I HAD TO POST SOMETHING!! So plz bear with me...