Pandemic

[eleanorrigby_66]

Title: Pandemic (Chapter 11)
Time/Location: June 1965. Hospital.
Pairing: John/Paul, George/Ringo (progressively). A bit of John/Brian in this chapter.
Warnings: Quite a long chapter. VERY bad language. Violence. And something bad.
Previous Parts: HERE!Summary: It's 1965, and a terrible virus is spreading. Those who get it turn violent, dangerous

Comments

[hello_goodbye_4]

Oh my Gawd.... whatever do you expect me to do with myslef now?????
That was so... so... INTENSE! And action-packed!! And you've STILL not told us what happened to Paul and George... and now THIS terrible bombshell! I can't believe Brian's infected!!

And I have to agree that as well as all the action, you've still SOMEHOW managed to keep all the emotion, and affection - and keep it all perfectly in character. And even though Paul and George didn't feature at all in this chapter, it still felt as though they were there - they were a big part of it.

But OH NO! They left Nel and Mal behind! And DEAR GOD, I hope they find the boys before Brian does. I am SOOOO SCARED! You always leave me terrified at the end of each of these chapters. I had a dream about this fic the other night by the way.

I loved...
“Wait, we need more….”
“We have PLENTY!”
“BUT PLEASE… HE’S SO SICK!”
“RINGO WE HAVE EVERYTHING! LET’S GO!”
“WHAT ABOUT CLOTHES???” Ringo cried
“WE DON’T NEED CLOTHES!”
“But… but he’s been sweating…he might need…”
God, I love how Ringo is still so caring and considerate, even when they're being chased by loads of psycho killers! Thinking about him being sweaty and whatnot... I think that's th least of their worries!

[eleanorrigby_66]

Hehe, thank you, I'm glad you liked it!!
I was actually planning on having an update on Paul/Georges situation first. That was the big plan. But then I realised it would be far more evil of me to keep the suspence going, and to NOT tell you where the hell they are!!

you've still SOMEHOW managed to keep all the emotion, and affection - and keep it all perfectly in character.
Whoo! Thank you! I'm so glad you think so. The whole point of me writing this story was not to focus on the action/gore but the relationships/loyalty. So I'm glad you think it's working.

Oh yeahhh, and Ringo will forever be caring and considerate no matter WHAT the situation!!