Band On the Run, Ch. 2: "Stars"

[darth_viye]

I'm back (finally)! And look! I bring good tidings of comfort and joy--and a SEX SCENE!

Title:  "Band on the Run Ch. 2"
Author:  Darth Viye
Pairings:  John/ Paul + implied John/George, John/Stu, and John/Pete 
Rating: NC-17
Timeframe: AU
Summary:  The Beatles are among the most feared gangs in the nation, but there are some crimes that they did not

Comments

[withalittlewit]

OMG. We commented at the same time. That was totally awesome.

[withalittlewit]

HUZZAH. Can I... Can I be the man? :O

[withalittlewit]

Wow. Amazing, hot, fucking fantastic. I really love Paul in this for some reason; he's just so deliciously twisted. Can't wait for the next chapter!

[b_and_b]

Jesus H. Christ and all the apostles!!
Your imagery is DEADLY, woman. I LOVE IT SO. That sex was so fucking brutal and primal, and GOD did I love it. I could totally see Paul as pictured when you wrote it, and then some. This was just... Mindblowing. I love it so much. And the part before he ran into Paul, that was so beautiful, I could just picture the scenery as much as Johnny did...

[darth_viye]

Thanks! Also:
YOUR. ICON. *UNF!*

[bbjkrss]

...Wow. This is *really* good. Like, I could imagine picking this off of a shelf at a bookstore good. :D The descriptions of the setting were really nice, and the way you described the people by saying actions and things like that instead of just plain old adjectives was amazing. Makes me really jealous, to be honest. Wish I could write more like that. <.<

Getting into specifics, I like how you've identified what each of the four has as their "trademark" I guess. Ringo with his shooting, George being the chemist... (LOVE that image, by the way) and Paul just being so *creepy*- I seriously thought he was going to cut John up a lot worse than that. And I love John's emotions in this chapter. Feel so bad for him. :(

So yes, loving this very much. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter! :D

[larainefan]

I quite like Georgie as the chemist also!

Fascinating work on this chapter, hope to see more of it soon! Can't wait to see where it's all leading! And bonus points again for the train travel they're doing.

[darth_viye]

I admit to being in absolute love with my image of Georgie-the-chemist! *jumps upon bandwagon* To be honest,I only wrote it partly because somebody needed to make bombs,and partly I want an excuse to write/draw a scene with George in safety goggle that are WAAAAY too big :3