Comments | beadattitude: Fic: SGA: Teyla Catches On Quickly

beadattitude

Fic: SGA: Teyla Catches On Quickly

May 04, 2007 16:21

Title: Teyla Catches On Quickly
Series: Checkmate 'VersePairing: McShep (currently pre-slash ( Read more... )

checkmate 'verse, checkmate, mcshep, sga

Comments 126

ceitie May 5 2007, 00:56:31 UTC

I am filled with love for Teyla here, and playing with John and the ball, and, and, the forehead thing, and Rodney blushing, and why John is cat and not something that can rise above. Awesome.

beadattitude May 5 2007, 01:04:38 UTC

Thank you so much!! Teyla is made of awesome!

dogeared May 5 2007, 00:58:06 UTC

eeeeeeeee obstacle course! Hahahaha leaping John is so adorable, and so is blushing, pleased Rodney, and I love Teyla being all insightful about why John might have been turned into a cat.

(Also, the ear nuzzling in The Houseguest? A;SDFLAKFSJ SO CUTE, oh my heart. OH BOYS.)

beadattitude May 5 2007, 01:06:04 UTC

They are pretty cute, I think. I like that John can be bouncy around her and its okay to be goofy with her.

mecurtin May 5 2007, 00:58:12 UTC

*Ded* from cute. And love.

You left your italics tag open here:

“Mee/I>mer.”

I think you must have face-planted mid-sentence here:
very clear and nhbe erydirect

This sentence doesn't make sense as-is, did you mean "a man used to"?:
Colonel Sheppard had so many responsibilities and shouldered them quite well, especially for a man unused to more solitary service in flight

beadattitude May 5 2007, 01:09:00 UTC

Oh yeah, totally snoozing. Thanks for the fixes!

Also ::revives::

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beadattitude May 5 2007, 01:07:48 UTC

Oh, I think that was one of the moments when I dozed off. ::snort:: Fixed it!

You know, I had no idea Teyla's piece was going to be so tender or so insightful. I thought they were just going to play catch, but they surprised me.

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beadattitude May 5 2007, 01:29:41 UTC

Thank you so much!

No, no cat on my compy. My Goldberry used to love to lie between the monitor and keyboard, and every once in a while she would roll back on the funciton keys to gaze up at me adoringly. (Such a love she is)

I have a laptop now, and she stayed by my side today, snuggling into whatever part of my she could curl into. A most cuddly girl.

tesserae_ May 5 2007, 01:20:18 UTC

I loved this, especially the thought of John bounding all over the room; my cats both do the forehead thing when they're feeling affectionate, and I have spent all day playing fetch with my calico. So this has been doubly lovely - thank you!

beadattitude May 5 2007, 01:31:17 UTC

Yeah, I kind of can't wait until he has a crazy cat moment. He'll probably get it in the lab, which might be problematic.

So glad you're enjoying, Tesse!