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fractured_love July 7 2018, 17:56:28 UTC
Wow you and your devious giggling. A third chapter in a row with smutty smut! And it just keeps getting better.

In the least creepy way possible, can I say that it's just so mom of Jin to "help" Tae like. But not incestuous and creepy. A tiny bit incestuous...but this feels like the setup for an orgy though. There's already threesomes, Jin and Nam are kinky enough for it probably and Yoongi is certified freely accepting of many things and also kinky. And I feel like Kookie's approach towards learning about blowjobs extends to other fun sexy time things. Maybe. No pressure to write an orgy, but if you do, can Jin have to finesse Jungkook's mom sometime in the middle of it because that would just be hilarious to me.

I stick with my "overly encouraging friends are sometimes not as helpful as they think they are" viewpoint. Not everyone goes from Madonna to whore in two days, although it's obviously okay if that's how you wanna do it.

We're in a honeymoon period again and I'm always sus of honeymoons. Unless this is the windup to the happy ending. But also I like that Kookie is getting the extended version of his introduction to sex.

Next up, beach!! Muscles and can Jungkook show off how strong he is I want a strength!kink scene where he throws Yoongi into the water and it leads to sexy times.

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be_ddelusionall July 12 2018, 17:18:46 UTC
How about a fourth? Or should I let you rest?

LOL I am known to write orgies, aren't I? But no, this isn't going to turn into one. Jimin is sick of sharing Tae with Hobi at this point, so that is going to stop, and Yoongi isn't really a "More than one" kind of guy anymore.

Well to make you feel better, I'm only planning on writing another 3 parts to this fic. Maybe only 2. I don't know yet. So yes, still in honeymoon phase, but nothing too distrastic to make the fic longer.

Muscle kink is not something I planned for this fic. Just cute kink. I do enjoy a strong Jungkook throwing his hyungs around though :)

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