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songbird52317 July 19 2016, 20:40:16 UTC
Wow, that was intense. And very sexy. Clueless Yunho was very cute. But I think I like furious Yoowhan the best. I just hope he's OK.

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be_ddelusionall July 23 2016, 16:51:47 UTC
I like Clueless Yunho alot :)
Yoohwan will be just fine!
glad you like it! <3

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shinchul303 July 19 2016, 22:08:13 UTC
Oh dear, I'm really worried about Yoohwan's coughing at the end. He could end up in a really vulnerable situation.

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be_ddelusionall July 23 2016, 16:52:21 UTC
He'll be okay. He's just over-exerted himself and emotions. He just needs some water ... and a hug. :)
glad you like it!

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be_ddelusionall July 23 2016, 16:52:36 UTC
Yeah, Yoohwan is awesome!

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harunotenshi July 21 2016, 11:43:49 UTC

yoohwan is finally starting to live a normal life after what he and his brother have gone through so i understand why he's furious at his brother right now. yoochun is an overprotective brother, that's a fact. he just wants nothing bad to happen. but right now, what he did made things worse. it would have been better if he hadn't confronted his brother like that and just waited for them to wake up and let them explain themselves. then again, this is yoochun so i guess the shouting is a given.

yoohwan did have a point though... even if he's just 15, he'd been through the same shit as his brother. right now what he needs is his brother to understand.

i'm hoping that yunho will have followed yoohwan lr something... he's having an attack right now and the only person yoohwan will most likely let him get near him is yunho...

maybe jaejoong... but that's kind of a long shot...

update again soon!

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be_ddelusionall July 23 2016, 16:53:54 UTC
normal for the spider is chaos for the fly, right? :)

the brothers will talk
it's the rest of the story that I'm dealing with ...

this story isn't doing what I wanted it to do, but that's pretty normal for me.
<3

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n3uromanc3r July 23 2016, 12:42:01 UTC
I'm so disappointed about their ruined date! Okay they overslept, also, they haven't planned such things on their first date, but still Yoochun's reaction after their history was really ridiculous! He's totally failed at parenting - although I don't think he should try to behave like he was Yoowhan's parent at all...
Hopefully now he starts to treat Yoowhan differently, probably they just need some distance.

Anyway Yunho's innocence and enthusiasm was so irresistible, I hope this scene didn't scare him away from Yoowhan!

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be_ddelusionall July 23 2016, 16:54:35 UTC
don't worry too much
Yunho will totally understand!

I love writing eager!virgin!Yunho ... he makes me happy!

glad you like it! <3

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