The Arrow's Flight 10/?

[be_ddelusionall]

Title: The Arrow's Flight 10

Comments

[songbird52317]

Gripping! This is just fraught with tension. I love it!

[be_ddelusionall]

I actually think this is the most tension-filled fic I have written. Even when I try to slow down the action, it just picks right back up again!

glad you like it! <3

[jasexists]

Oh my goodness this is getting so exciting!

[be_ddelusionall]

i hope it stays that way!
I've got about 6 chapters left
glad you like it! <3

[shinchul303]

Great chapter - the tension is racking up!

Every vignette in this is superb showmanship. Heavily cinematic. Impossible not to visual all the nuances.

I usually have a difficult time getting back into a multi-chaptered fic, but that is absolutely NOT the case here!

[be_ddelusionall]

There's so much tension in this fic, that even as the author, it's driving me mad with nervousness!

/blushes/ thank you so much! <3

[ztarplay]

[be_ddelusionall]

This entire fic is full of cliffhangers.
I'm trying to finish it as fast as I can though, so you don't have to sit and wait for them for weeks on end. :)

[ztarplay]

*Shrugs*
Take your time bb. It's your story.
I know you will finish and that's comfort enough.
(^_^)

[be_ddelusionall]

I've got the next 3 chapters done ... sure you want me to take my time ... ;)

[harunotenshi]

things seem more dangerous than before... wow. the tension is thick and high and just... this is like reading a physical book and approaching the climax of the story... i'd be turning page after page after page until i get to the very end

[be_ddelusionall]

omg /blushes? thank you!

everyone is WORRIED
and it's annoying me to no end because I need to SET STUFF UP FOR THINGS TO HAPPEN

soon ... things will happen soon <3