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be_ddelusionall

Wind

Sep 21, 2014 22:48

Title: Wind
Pairing: Yunho/Jaejoong
Rating: PG (I know. Crazy huh?)
Disclaimer: They are not mine even in the deepest reaches of my soul.

Summary: Jaejoong meets the Wind.

A/N: Don't know where this came from. This fic is NOT based on the lyrics to this song, just the music and Jaejoong's voice.

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( He remembers the first time he felt the Wind blow. )

rating: pg, length: oneshot, genre: supernatural, pairing: yunho/jaejoong, genre: fantasy

Comments 73

rjaejoo September 22 2014, 04:58:33 UTC

Lol. Yeah you wrote a beautiful g rated story. :) Seriously, I love the concept of the story and how gentle it is. It made me smile in the end, how the wind's strength is what took him to heaven. Simply sweet.

be_ddelusionall September 27 2014, 18:05:48 UTC

It isn't often that I write G stories, but I'm glad you enjoyed this. It was ... I don't know ... it was very easy to just write this. Simple and love. I can't explain it.
I'm glad you like it! <3

tapzz September 22 2014, 05:10:34 UTC

ahhhh...such a beautiful story...its such a refreshing plot..plzz write some more stories like this...really made my day..^^

be_ddelusionall September 27 2014, 18:13:20 UTC

thank you! i'm glad you like it.
stories like this cannot be planned
but I will write it if the mood strikes :)
<3

harunotenshi September 22 2014, 05:23:07 UTC

wow... this was wonderful. you wrote something so simple and yet held so much meaning because of the way you had worded every sentence. i enjoyed reading this and loved how jaejoong and yunho just understood each other and were destined for each other. :)

be_ddelusionall September 28 2014, 15:35:53 UTC

/blushes/ thank you, my haru haru!
I'm glad you enjoyed it!
I like making YuNjae destined to each other!
<3 <3

donud September 22 2014, 05:50:20 UTC

omg this is EPIC... EPIC... and so different from your usual style.. i love it so FUCKING MUCHHHH!!!!!

be_ddelusionall September 28 2014, 15:36:29 UTC

*nods* I actually made a mental effort to make this writing style different. i'm glad it worked and /blushes/ thank you! glad you like it! <3

jaan30 September 22 2014, 06:16:31 UTC

Wow, this is amazing! It's so sweet and simple, but complex at the same time. I don't know how you come up with this stuff, so creative! Jaejoong becomes Music? I was hooked from beginning to end. Love it!<333

be_ddelusionall September 28 2014, 15:37:57 UTC

I wish I knew how I came up with this stuff too because then I could do it more often
and yes, Jaejoong becomes Music. In my brain he is that strain of melody that keeps you calm or makes you happy :)

glad you like it! <3