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be_ddelusionall

Tears of the Poor 4/?

Jun 15, 2012 10:59

Title: Tears of the Poor 4 ( Read more... )

threesome: yunho/jaejoong/junsu, threesome: heechul/hangeng/siwon, warning: slavery, pairing: changmin/oc, warning: het, warning: bondage, completed: tears of the poor, pairing: yunho/oc, genre: science fiction, rating: nc-17

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donud June 15 2012, 17:01:51 UTC

OMG SPOTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

donud June 15 2012, 17:22:00 UTC

i realized one thing here even before JunSu mentioned it.. yes.. JaeJoong in Doushite with his changed attitude as Prince.. make him hotter... gosh.. i loved this JaeJoong too..

And i loved special relationship between JaeMin.. i love them to the extend i hope ChangMin wouldn't mind to have a gay romantic relationship only for Jae.. xD crazy as sound it is.. but it's true.. make it for me?? *wink wink*

actually, i kinda upset and feel not fair for YooChun's character here.. He seems so left out from YunJaeSuMin relationship.. *sobs sobs*

thank you for your updating! been waiting so long ^^

be_ddelusionall June 17 2012, 03:52:05 UTC

I'm very much in love with this Jaejoong, always have been, and now I get to show him as a warrior and a prince on his home world, I am very very excited.

I"m pretty sure I could plausibly make Changmin GaeForJae, but then what about HoSu???

/giggles/ I love Yoochun - so much hate for one of my favorite characters in this story

thank you! glad you like it! ♥

tarwen_xoxo June 15 2012, 17:16:15 UTC

Oh god, they're going to be trekking through the cold, harsh, dangerous winter for a long time?
I hope everyone survives!

(Damn I want to see Jae in white boots...)

be_ddelusionall June 17 2012, 03:59:04 UTC

it is going to be a long while, but don't worry! they're with three very capable Doushitens!

(oh my god, I want to see Jae in JUST white boots)
♥

tito_grizzly June 17 2012, 11:11:50 UTC

STOP PUTTING IDEAS IN MY HEAD!!!

be_ddelusionall June 17 2012, 15:56:57 UTC

but it's oh so much fun :)

min7girl June 15 2012, 17:17:06 UTC

Jae is ok! I was sooo freaking worried! I so love the banter between Jae and Changmin. Adorable, sexy wonderful. I also like Yunho's last message home. Very clear for his supporters.

be_ddelusionall June 17 2012, 03:59:23 UTC

the JaeMin is always fun to write :)

thank you! glad you like it! ♥

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be_ddelusionall June 17 2012, 03:59:51 UTC

/nods/ I agree!!!

glad you like it! ♥

xtooline June 15 2012, 17:27:29 UTC

Hurray! New chapter! I really believe they are going to kick the invaders' butts out. I'm sorry there's no play time at the moment, but they're making progress. And I am particularly grateful that you didn't make us wait to find out if Jae was ok. And he's SO ok!

Love this love this.

be_ddelusionall June 17 2012, 04:02:12 UTC

play time ... I don't know ... JaeSu are well trained hookers ... /grins/ ... don't think Yunho can stay quiet though :)
may have to gag him

glad you love it!
and thank you for all the help you've given me on it!
♥

xtooline June 23 2012, 03:15:31 UTC

But you know I'm so happy to.
♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

Definitely gag him. XD