Tears of the Poor 3/?

[be_ddelusionall]

Title: Tears of the Poor 3

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[be_ddelusionall]

thank you for reading!
♥

[min7girl]

Hell-a-sweet! SPOT!

[min7girl]

This fic has everything and everyone. Such fun. Also I fear for Jae. He tempts fate with the recovery of his pride.

I do like that changmin and Yoona were holding hands in the tunnels. That was sweet.

[be_ddelusionall]

He does tempt fate, but don't worry, he's not stupid, so he won't endager himself unintentionally :)

Were they? /// doesn't remember writing that ///

[min7girl]

"Yoona kept a firm grip on his hand and Junsu stayed behind everyone."

The "his" in this sentence was interpreted to Changmin. My brain tends to focus on him. :)

[isimplicityy]

GHSFdgoiusdhnWUHUEWNFZ!!!!!!!!!!!! HAI ^^

[isimplicityy]

So instead, their hands stayed in moral places and their kiss expressed their need for each other.

^^ It's surprising that that's even possible.
Haha Yoochun is so predictable, of course he would want to stay, but Yunho still has the reins over him. It's kind of disadvantageous for them since they have so many people... It's a lot harder to escape and to make sure that everyone is safe. I wonder if someone will end up being left behind... And even if they all manage to escape, what are they planning to do? Hmm lots of complications ><. Looking forward to the next part~ (:

[be_ddelusionall]

yeah, with HoSu it's very hard to stay moral :)

there are so many compications in this fic
man, I don't even want to think about it sometimes

i'm glad you like it! ♥

[stirred_seoul]

SMUT

[stirred_seoul]

I Really Hate How Much Of A Bastard Chun Is In This Series LOL.
Min And Jae Are Working Together Very Nicely!
Poor HoSu, Worrying About Their JaeJae :[

[be_ddelusionall]

Bastard Yoochun makes me Giggle :)

i'm glad you like it! ♥

spot

[keyhartme]

SPOT. and OMGYESS thanks for the update.