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be_ddelusionall

Bent Kisses 8/8

Jan 21, 2011 18:51

Title: Bent Kisses 8/8 ( Read more... )

pairing: changmin/junsu, genre: college, completed: bent kisses, pairing: jaejoong/oc, pairing: yunho/yoochun, rating: r

Comments 131

naegastar January 22 2011, 01:54:16 UTC

OMG UPDATE

naegastar January 22 2011, 02:16:54 UTC

God that was so. fucking. hot. But Yunho...why not suck on Yoochun there? It's raining...no one else is gonna come to the playground D:

Also.."Jaejoong had his arm through Adam’s, and Adam looked slightly dazed." Dazed from sexy Jae lovin'! XD I love it ^^ Super super excellent bb <3

Will beg for epilogue

be_ddelusionall January 29 2011, 21:05:32 UTC

Yeah, Yunho should have just sucked him off there.
Maybe next time :)

glad you loved it!

sorry

jirluvien January 22 2011, 01:54:58 UTC

smut~

jirluvien January 22 2011, 02:13:13 UTC

lol at the final talk XD

I liked this fic, gives me warm feeling :)

be_ddelusionall January 29 2011, 21:05:44 UTC

thank you! I'm glad you're all warm now :)

yuki_3 January 22 2011, 02:00:22 UTC

SMUT

yuki_3 January 22 2011, 10:03:19 UTC

Oh wow awwwww so many hot kisses under the rain :'DDD
And I've never read a fic with so much fail and cheesy pick up lines like this before looooool xD cheesy bastard hahaha
And omg, jae finally got in Adam's pants xDD of course jae can do it :'DDD
And the last conv xD it took me a while to figure who is talking, but I understood at the end hahaha xDD

Awesome fic bb :'DD

be_ddelusionall January 29 2011, 21:06:22 UTC

*nods* lots and lots of kisses
I was DYING to write a fic where I could use all those pickup lines

glad you liked it! thank you darling! ♥

Loveee itttttt fifi_moon January 22 2011, 02:03:03 UTC

Seriously, so goood. I love this whole story!

The characterisations are good and its just a really nice believable story (not that i dont like the AU fics)

Ugh, 2U is just phwaaar

Re: Loveee itttttt be_ddelusionall January 29 2011, 21:06:45 UTC

thank you!!! I'm glad you liked it!!! and yes, I love 2U, so hot! ♥

zoeybunnygals January 22 2011, 02:12:10 UTC

lol the 2U love...i love this.....it's all lovey dovey and just a hint of smut.......

be_ddelusionall January 29 2011, 21:07:00 UTC

aw, thank you! glad you loved it