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alphaflyer December 20 2016, 23:54:24 UTC
That was pretty cool! The dual POV worked really well, as did the cities.

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poppetawoppet December 27 2016, 02:38:22 UTC
thank you!

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franztastisch December 21 2016, 07:44:26 UTC
I loved Even More Lucky the unicorn. :D

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amanuensis1 December 24 2016, 15:37:15 UTC
Oh, thank youuu! This is exactly the sort of thing I wanted to read. I love the alternating point of view, and the lack of a fixed timeline. Worked perfectly!

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kiss_me_cassie December 25 2016, 00:26:13 UTC
(Clint does not plan. It’s best if he’s left out of plans.) - LOFL! That is awesome! *g*

And then there's all the little ins they know about each other, and the cities, and Even More Lucky, and... So much fun. :)

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gsparkle December 30 2016, 17:47:16 UTC
Oh, I am sooooo late in commenting but this was truly so wonderful! I absolutely LOVE the concept and the way you wrote both of them and that the whole team being there and and and etc, it's just so great that I don't have the words. Thank you thank you thank you!

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