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FIC: Five Times Clint and Natasha Ended Up Under the Mistletoe (for always_a_queen) - PG

Dec 25, 2012 12:55

Title: Five Times Clint and Natasha Ended Up Under the Mistletoe
Author: allisnow
A Gift For: always_a_queen
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Pairings: Clint/Natasha
Summary/Prompt Used: Mistletoe/Christmas-themed
Authors Notes: Thanks to my awesome beta, whom I will properly laud after the reveal :)

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Comments 34

workerbee73 December 25 2012, 20:56:37 UTC

I enjoyed this so much! I really loved how you captured the quiet moments between them, and the trust. The scene in the hospital was so lovely, as was the ending. Thank you! :)

allisnow January 10 2013, 05:21:39 UTC

Thank you! My brain was consumed with the Epic Sequel of Epicness during November and I couldn't come up with a plot to save my life during December, so I was really hoping I could pull off the 'interconnected vignettes' thing. I think this was my first '5 times' fic!

workerbee73 January 10 2013, 12:36:53 UTC

Dude, i'm so impressed you kept it down to a oneshot. that's a feat that's been ... challenging for me. O_o

alphaflyer December 25 2012, 22:00:24 UTC

Sigh. Lovely, pulling just the right strings. The idea of a SHIELD Christmas Party cracks me up -- and of course Coulson would be making the Perfect Cookie.

Oh -- can we make Doreen from the cafeteria into Official Head Canon for members of this bar?

purely_distel December 26 2012, 09:35:38 UTC

OH yes, brilliant idea about Doreen!

allisnow January 10 2013, 05:21:58 UTC

Oh -- can we make Doreen from the cafeteria into Official Head Canon for members of this bar?

I would be honored! :D

shenshen77 December 25 2012, 23:06:43 UTC

Just lovely, right in the feels :) All the little moments between them, Coulson's cookies... And just the right combination of hurty/angsty and comforty ;D I repeat myself, lovely <3

allisnow January 10 2013, 05:22:10 UTC

Thank you!

astridv December 26 2012, 00:27:03 UTC

I totally loved it! You hit just the right notes for the mood and the dialogue.
Great, thinks Natasha. Like the people in this room need another reason to think I’m secretly planning to kill all of them.

:D I just love her sense of humor. And all the little details, like Coulson's Christmas cookies. And, heh, the ever present poisonous parasitic plant.

allisnow January 10 2013, 05:22:53 UTC

Thanks, glad you enjoyed! Except when I wanted to kill it, it was fun to write :)

folie_lex December 26 2012, 00:35:30 UTC