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[morebliss]

Well, I guess it had to happen some time! After reading such wonderful fic, you eventually try to write some? Here's my effort. Complete and utter porn (with maybe a teensy weensy miniscule bit of schmoop that just seemed to grab on at the end).

Title: Gut instinct
Pairing: Billy/Dom
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: First fic, un-betad, PWP, need

Comments

[msilverstar]

Oh, nice PWP. I love Dom's stomach and Dom's hands wrapped in leather and Dom fucking Billy with his hands still tied up. Very very hot.

[msilverstar]

By the way, if you ever want a beta, I really like doing that, esp. for new writers, and I'd be happy to beta yours.

[morebliss]

Thank you so much for the lovely feeback, and the offer. I will so take you up on that! I've got a few bunnies running around in my head and am still really nervous about my writing, so an established guiding hand like yours would be fabulous. Thanks!