Dinner and the Duchess
I'm writing a scene where Bastin, Jara, Nashau, and Podome have dinner with the Duchess d'Seaside. It's a bad scene. It's necessary for the advancement of the story, but it's still bad. I'm giving it the NaNoWriMo treatment and just plowing through it regardless. I could spend a lot of time fixing these two chapters that are only a transition from the first act to the second. I wish I had gotten them right on the first pass. Hopefully I can improve them with the second. As it stands now, it's amateur stuff. Must fix! Must wait for the revision. It's chapter 40. I'm sure the 39 chapters before it need work as well.