in the dark

[bbyah]

Title: in the dark
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Homin
Genre: AU
Summary: Some people light a fire under you. Some people just want to watch you burn. As usual, Yunho is drawn to a flame.

Comments

[lyeon]

hello! i really liked the feel of this piece, it left some really vivid images in my head. one of them is of changmin standing with that red popsicle in his mouth by the swimming pool where everything is super bright and saturated under the sun, where yunho is tanned and barefoot wearing sunglasses a singlet and shorts aha ha haaaaa

i liked the contrast between the sunny noisy pool where yunho works and the quiet middle-of-nowhere house changmin lives in too, there was a lingering picture in my head after i finished reading of the two of them lying in the middle of a dark empty field somewhere just looking up at the stars... oh and the dandelion wishes were adorable :>

also love how yunho is so smitten (he imagines changmin at the pool too!!) and all the fandom-y references you added, like when yunho mistakes changmin for a stag and then calls him bambi later on hehehe o deer

i hadn't associated light em up with changmin at all before this but now that you mention it I COMPLETELY AGREE, the part where patrick screams 'i'm on fire', yeah chwang could totally nail that *^*

oops this is a really rambly comment haha but yes thank you for sharing this, looking forward to reading more of your stuff! \o/

[bbyah]

thank you for the lovely feedback! yes, I definitely knew I wanted to write about some of the scenes just from picturing them...especially the dandelions, I found a yard full of them and knew it was going to show up in this!

I am a sucker for fandom references ;;; and if changmin ever sings light em up, I can die happily .__.;
I'm glad you enjoyed it \o/