[FMA Big Bang Fic] Chasing the Desert (2/9)

[bay115]

Title: Chasing the Desert
Author: bay115
Genre: Drama/Romance
Rating: R
Word Count: ~40,000
Pairing/Characters: Roy/Riza, Miles/Miles’s wife, Scar, Breda, Fuery, Maria Ross, Grumman, various other canon and original characters
Warnings: Language, some violence, mild sex, instances of discrimination over a fictional race/culture (in this case, the

Comments

[cornerofmadness]

I really liked the meeting with Scar's master. Roy's level of apprehension feels right

[bay115]

Thanks! Scar's master strikes me as very interesting so I tried my best to have his characterization right. Also glad to hear you thought Roy's apprehension feels right. Didn't want to go too overboard and such, heh.

[cornerofmadness]

I've never honestly thought about Scar's master so I was intrigued that someone decided to try and take him on.

[bay115]

Heh haven't thought of him much either since he only appeared a couple of times. As I was planning this story I began taking an interest in him.

[sonjajade]

I like that you didn't forget about the refuges at Xerxes! Well done on incorporating them into your story!

[ladynorbert]

Really good, again! Though I think I'm sharing Roy's apprehension here. Something's going to happen in the desert, I have a feeling.