There be bears in these woods.
30 Days of Gangstermoll Meme continues...
22- The Ten best things about your story
1. the dialogue
2. the development of Eames as a character
3. the development of Dom Cobb as a character (I know a lot of readers love to hate him, but I have to admit I simply love how surprisingly important he is in Arthur's life and how he turned out to be so complex)
4. the beginning
5. how so many of the OCs work and are fleshed out (Cho!)
6. Balal
7. how all of Arthur's relationships with different people reflect different aspects of himself
8. I'm actually pretty happy with how the plot has unfurled
9. how morally ambiguous everyone is in the story
10. the pacing
23- The ten things you could improve
1. tighten up the length
2. there are so some scenes I could probably cut/shorten/rearrange
Honestly, I can't think of 8 more things because if I knew I could improve on them, I'd simply go ahead and improve/change the story.
24- Why are you going to do with it when it’s done?
Dance with victory but also grieve a little. I always find it difficult to say goodbye to stories that I've been working on for a very long time--I grow to care about the characters and sometimes it can be hard to let go of them. It's hard to imagine that I won't be thinking about them, or what they'd do, on a weekly or even daily basis anymore.
25- What is the main twist/ plot point?
That's a secret! Read on to find out!
26- What is the most exciting scene/ chapter/ part
That's a big hard for me to say. I'm guessing most readers who are rooting for Arthur/Eames would say when Arthur & Eames finally slept together for the first time (not much of a spoiler there).
I do hope the ending is intense/exciting, though.
22- The Ten best things about your story
1. the dialogue
2. the development of Eames as a character
3. the development of Dom Cobb as a character (I know a lot of readers love to hate him, but I have to admit I simply love how surprisingly important he is in Arthur's life and how he turned out to be so complex)
4. the beginning
5. how so many of the OCs work and are fleshed out (Cho!)
6. Balal
7. how all of Arthur's relationships with different people reflect different aspects of himself
8. I'm actually pretty happy with how the plot has unfurled
9. how morally ambiguous everyone is in the story
10. the pacing
23- The ten things you could improve
1. tighten up the length
2. there are so some scenes I could probably cut/shorten/rearrange
Honestly, I can't think of 8 more things because if I knew I could improve on them, I'd simply go ahead and improve/change the story.
24- Why are you going to do with it when it’s done?
Dance with victory but also grieve a little. I always find it difficult to say goodbye to stories that I've been working on for a very long time--I grow to care about the characters and sometimes it can be hard to let go of them. It's hard to imagine that I won't be thinking about them, or what they'd do, on a weekly or even daily basis anymore.
25- What is the main twist/ plot point?
That's a secret! Read on to find out!
26- What is the most exciting scene/ chapter/ part
That's a big hard for me to say. I'm guessing most readers who are rooting for Arthur/Eames would say when Arthur & Eames finally slept together for the first time (not much of a spoiler there).
I do hope the ending is intense/exciting, though.