Suitors - Chapter 06: The Longest Night Part II

[batty_gal]

Title: Suitors - (Chapter 06: The Longest Night Part II)
Author: batty_gal a.k.a Tetra26
Rating: T
Fandom: Kyou Kara Maou
Pairing: Wolfram x ???
Word Count: 5523
Fic Type: Ongoing
Fic Summary: After Wolfram ended his engagement in a fit of rage, suitors from all around started to flock to the castle to seek his hand - much to Gwendal's dismay. Who will

Comments

[pandawolf]

Wow, the proverbial shit about to hit the fan XP

[batty_gal]

Indeed, it is!

[lullachan]

\0/ Wow, I totally wasn't expecting that... Cheri and SARA! \0/
What is Cheri planning to do? She must have something in mind, right? And more importantly, what does Sara's new haircut look like Sara have in store for Wolfram now?
Next chapter: Wolfram and Saralegui's game resumes!
*_* The long-awaited (at least by me) "next round" that Sara promised in his last letter... Can't wait!!! *_*

I really enjoy the pacing of the fic and the way you managed to show us each character's perspective without interrupting the flow of your story. Oh and I love your OCs, Herschel (as usual) and that auntie were absolutely lolarious in this chapter.

Ps: Long chapters are ♥

[batty_gal]

Yep, you knew he had to come back! It's not a proper sequel if His Cattiness doesn't show up to taunt His Brattiness (my new terms for Saralegui and Wolfram, LOL).

I was worried about the length of this chapter because most of them, so far, have been under 3500 words (and sometimes under 2000). However, I could not cut any more out of this thing and not have it make enough sense.

It's fun inventing OCs, mainly for either the lulz or to annoy other characters (poor Gwendal).

[lullachan]

if His Cattiness doesn't show up to taunt His Brattiness
And I'm pretty sure that His Brattiness wouldn't have it any other way! XD

poor Gwendal
Indeed, even Conrart abandoned him... Hmmmmm, someone's going to knit a lot after this ball...

Ps: Have you decided which plot direction you will follow?

[batty_gal]

Have you decided which plot direction you will follow?

After the next chapter, this thing could go 5 different ways - I kid you not. I might end up writing it as a "pick your poison" thing, with endings for each of the pairings I'm considering. Nothing is set in stone at the moment.

[free2bhappe]

Wow, I really love this story. It's extremely well written, and quite humorous. I especially love your characterization of Wolfram.

I noticed you're on FF.net. I'm running over there to read more of your fics.

[batty_gal]

Hi, I'm glad you like this story! All of my fics over there are the same as here, though there's more over here than there (however, ff.net is easier to navigate, and my tagging system is full of FAIL).

[free2bhappe]

I think I've read everything you have written on FF.NET. I love all your stories, especially the one about Wolfram and Alford. I always wondered what a get-together would be like between those two.

I'm kind of new to this LJ thing. May I add you as a friend?

[batty_gal]

Sure! I'll add you back! ♥

[abydos_star]

i'd like to see Wolfram and Yozak. :) i'd also like to see more of Murata's games... is it just me or is he not trying hard enough? or maybe he's just testing teh waters? :P we'll see,,..

Wolfram and Saralegui.. there's somethng interesting.. i would be something if Saralegui had a genuine interest in Wolfram but i find that dificult after their game.. :P

UPDATE SOON PLS!!! great chapter btw!

[batty_gal]

Hi there!

Yea, Murata's sitting this out right now, but don't worry: he plays his part after the next chapter. I'm still undecided on the end pairing (and am still considering a multi-ending because I'm so very indecisive).

[asakura_kindo]

Fiu!! I can finally review!!! I took me most of yesterday's night and part of this afternoon but I finally read "1 Up" and all of the available chapters of "Suitors" =P
Hahaha I Love your fics!!! I just ADORE how you picture Wolfram (so cunning and... witty xD hahaha oh how I love Him)...
OOWW I'm so intrigued in the matters of who will end up with him!!!... I must confess that even though I usually reproach Yuuri his lack of attention towards Wolfie...I still kind of want them to end up together =P ... although... I also like the idea of Murata and Wolf together...hahaha I'll just have to wait...

concerning this chapter.... Uhmmm Wolfie and Murata's sickness concerns me....I suspect Sara is involved.... and now that he has appeared... Woaaah!!! I really hope nothing bad happens to Wolfram!!!!...

I'll be waiting next chapter!!! =D

[batty_gal]

I'm glad you liked the stories! I love exploring Wolfram and the rest of the characters in different ways.