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FIC: TAATS Chapter 12: Resolution

Jan 17, 2009 18:04

Title: The Admirer and the Sage (Chapter 12: Resolution)
Author: Batty_Gal a.k.a Tetra26
Rating: M/NC-17
Fandom: Kyou Kara Maou
Pairing: Wolfram x Murata
Word Count: 2946
Fic Type: Ongoing
Summary: Things are finally resolved between Wolfram and Murata.

Prior chapters: 1 ~ 2 ~ 3 ~ 4 ~ 5 ~ 6 ~ 7 ~ 8 ~ 9 ~ 10 ~ 11

( “You go first,” Murata said. )

kkm:wolfram, fanfic, anime, kkm, fan fiction, fanfic: chaptered, slash, fic: taats, kkm:murata

Comments 8

pandawolf January 18 2009, 01:55:27 UTC

Oh, yes,yes,yes, YESSSS!

From the rehearse to the let's make dinner, not to mention the comedic sex, everything was 'smooth'!!

I wonder how Yuuri would react. Even he says that he doesn't swing that way, but Wolf is still his ex-fiance. And to see him so happy and free because of another, I'm sure there's an 'aftertaste'. It might not romantic, but still...

batty_gal January 18 2009, 02:08:30 UTC

I'm actually considering doing several oneshot sequels and prequels -- one of which dealing with Yuuri's POV.

I'm glad you found it to be smooth because I did a whole lot of rewriting on this one and finally came up with something that I thought "fit" (at least, I hope it does).

pandawolf January 18 2009, 02:23:23 UTC

Yeah, it'd be interesting to know Yuuri's inner thought.

It's passably smooth. Though imagining their sex scene was so funny :D

batty_gal January 18 2009, 02:37:22 UTC

I wanted it to parallel with the one in the first chapter, where Murata had fun with the one-night stand chick(who I purposely placed there to show that Murata's mind was on blonds with green eyes).

animaven January 18 2009, 14:51:03 UTC

I got such a kick out of their love-making. They were having so much fun while doing it. Sex doesn't have to be so serious all the time. Having a few laughs and fun made it more real. Wolfram and Murata are going to be a great couple. Love them both.

batty_gal January 18 2009, 15:35:53 UTC

I'm glad you found it to be real. I tried writing it without the humor, but it didn't seem to fit in with the rest of the fic. Therefore, Lollercourse instead of intercourse.

annakas January 19 2009, 01:19:31 UTC

I loved it!!!

I lovedit how there was humour in their sex and how they didn't take it way to seriously. Well they did take the feelings part seriously as they should but the sex was carefree and caring and fun. So adorable.

This chapter made me smile like mad.

annakas

batty_gal January 19 2009, 01:28:44 UTC

I'm glad you liked it! I was worried about this chapter. I'll be posting the epilogue either tomorrow or Tuesday. I'm already working on three related oneshots as well.