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[tsukiraven]

Title: Public Presentation
Author: tsukiraven
Universe: Nonlanverse, post-TDK.
Disclaimer: The Joker and Batsy/Bruce Wayne are the products of better minds than mine.
Rating: PG
Warnings: None. Work-safe.
Word Count: 623
Summary: Inflictions. He speaks louder and slower on the weightier words, the ones his companion should really notice.

A/N: Inspired!

Comments

[crimsonkila]

Wonderful. It sounded so pretty in my head I actually read it out loud. Very well done. Sensual with that edge of insanity needed pull their relationship together.

[bionic]

Different and interesting, and I love how you broke apart the sentences. Atmospheric is a good way to describe it. Enjoyed it lots!

[astraea]

I just really like the way you write...It's so different and unusual. Well I'd say that you are getting very good at writing B&J :D

[theflyingbeet]

I simply adore when the Batman/Joker (or Batman/Gordon) scenes happen on a rooftop. I think it's an invitation to intimacy... to ponderation... to sensuality...

And your fic brought that ambience to my mind. A truly inspired fic.

YES.

[darker_she_said]

I liked this very much. The way you break everything down, it makes it sudden and in the moment.